Neko Sketches

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These are just some neko bases I've been asked to design. First is a bamboo thicket. Second is a cave. Third is a tree-tunnel system (underground with a central entrance from the forest floor).
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Hi there Azumi!

A nice picture, but there was just one thing! Either get a scanner or try to cut the excess out of the photo. It's very distracting, and our eyes should be focused, although it's very had if you have ADHD, like me. Even if you don't, well, you get the idea. Secondly, I don't like the tilt that this photo is at. If you absolutely cannot get a scanner, try laying it down on a flat table, then trimming the excess when you put it on the computer.

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It's lovely, but.. what's the square-lookin' thingie up in the center?
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Hey Ayumi!

I peeked in just for the name 'Neko.' Fits well, I'd say! :)

Well, it's a good idea and before I comment on the picture, I really suggest that you should reduce the size of you images. Check out how to, here : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59687.html

1.Trees: Youre trees don't have much of defining lines. You'll need to show more line, more shading, to give the feel of natural, bark-like ruggedness.
2.As icanbefixed said, what's the square-like thingy?
3.Girl: Her mouth seems like it needs fixing, though I can't tell much, because of the photo quality. I think you could curve her feet slightly to make it looks like she has a grip on the tree and doesn't just slide on it.

Anyway, good work. Keep it up.
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