Who is This

I always have this picture in my head. I have no idea who he is-really!
Although I think he's pretty cute...ha ha. No, see I think it's a very good drawing. Don't you? I just had to draw this.

This is really good! That extra line on the nose is bugging me though, would it be better without it?

Anyway, great job!
Poem

Haha, you're getting cocky, aren't you?

No, see I think it's a very good drawing. Don't you?

Anyway, yes it is quite a nice drawing. I have a couple things to say:

1) The nose. Has this really weird line going through it. It bugs meee.

2)The lips also have strange lines going through them, which is also strange. The lower lip also is sticking quite far out, making him look younger. And the upper lip is off to one side.

3) The overall shape of the face and the jawline is very good.

4) The eyes look very feminine, probably because of the eyelashes, and the excess eyelid.

Overall, its very nice, if that's your style. Kind of cartoon-ish.

Cheers,
-Lena

I agree with Lena and poemperson, the nose would probably look better without the extra line on the right hand side. Maybe erase a bit of it, so that it doesn't go all the way up to the eyebrow? As for the eyes, I thought they looked a little small compared to the rest of the face. However, this was a very good drawing. I really like the neck, I think it looks very realistic. Good job!

Hehehe, you're an awesome artist, did anyone ever tell you that? ;D

Just a couple of things! His lips look super cracked, yet at they don't looked cracked in the right way, if that makes sense. Also, his right eye seems a little strange, as if there is no pupil. But I love the jacket... it's quite lovely!

Very cute, and I must say tis a lovely drawing!

I really like his hair for some reason, and kudos to you for not rushing it!
Also, the you've done very well on the jacket, I like the simple but effective detail gone into that. My main problems are with the nose and lips-- same reasons said before... the extra line down his nose looking quite odd, and the lines down his lips.

Overall, you have done a great job. PM me if you have any questions or want me review any more work!

-Onyx

Yes... the line on the nose is bugging me aswell... the lips are a bit out of place and the lines on the lips should be a bit lighter and not joined to the bottom... anyway, i really like this drawing.

You're a good drawer. Keep drawing.