Manga cartoon strip thing.

hello, and thank you for taking the time to look at this, I hope it doesn't disappoint!

Hello, roon! June here!

Nice! I don't have much criticism for this at all. I'm not one at all for manga and anime, but this is cool. It kind of seems like it's in the middle of a story, so some back tracking would be nice, as well as a continuation.

You do draw very well; nice work on the eyes there-- and the locket. In the picture with the address and fingers, you should draw some lines for knuckles, so that the fingers don't look so straight.

Thanks for sharing! Nice work-- do keep it up!

June

Hello Roon. I love to draw Manga myself though I haven't been brave enough to try comic strips yet. I think what you did so far is awesome and that you should keep up the good work. Your drawing has a nice unique touch to it giving it individuality. I had slight trouble reading the words on the computer but other than that, way to go!
~Dakota

Thank you for taking the time to look at this. It was for a competition, but it was the thing to work off, some children had to continue it, I was the judge. I haven't found the time to continue it or backtrack yet, but seeing as this was liked I may do so, because I enjoy drawing them as well!

~ Roon

Hi roon!

I'm guessing this is the comic strip you where talking about earlier, right?

I'm just gonna say that I really like how you draw manga. Its diferent, in a good way. The characters are super cute and, again, love the eyes.

It'd be awesome if you'd continue it.

Well, thats all.
~becks

Thank you, as soon as I find some spare time lying around I'll get on it! Thank you for your comments and support! Yeah this is the one I was talking about, I'm flattered that you like my style, and that you want me to continue, so thank you!

~ Roon