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Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:06 am
Katemabob says...



This is a quick drawing of a wolf I did on the computer. Hope you like it. :)
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Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:02 am
Sare Agama says...



this is really good! A few of my nit- pics;
The tail makes it look kind of like a squirrel. Maybe slim it down and not make it so bushy?
the front paw, the left one, has a jutting out part on the top of the leg. I don't know if that was intentional, but it bugs me.
Maybe you should lower the hind leg a bit. It just looks like the wolf is... Anyway, I think you ought to change it.

Overall: You did an awesome job on this. I like how you made it look animeish. That just seems to make it better. :D
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Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:52 pm
MeadowLark says...



Heya! This is pretty awesome! It's amazing to see what people can do on computers!Well, my nitpicks are that follows:

The wolf's eye seems a little funny. If I look at it one way it seems to far down, but then at times it doesn't. Or maybe that's just me. His tail is quite bushy for a wolf. The hind leg in the air seems skinnier than all the other ones. Perhaps it's supposed to be like that, I don't know.

I like the shading you did. Overall: Like I said, it's an awesome picture. Keep up the good work!

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Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:16 pm
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Thanks Guys, I will try to fix these up... one day...!!! And wait... looks like I forgot to shade some of the legs! I will fix that, too. Anyways, your comments are really helpful. Bye! :D
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Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:50 pm
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need to make more wolf pics...
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Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:50 pm
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Oh, you would know about squirrels, Sis! Did you know they have three hearts?
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Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:42 pm
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Awww, that's cute. It's nose is a little to long though - that bugs me :) It's well done for a quick drawing on the computer
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Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:39 pm
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Pretty. I do find the nose a bit weird, though. And I agree that the tail makes it look like a squirrel - but only a little bit.

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Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:00 pm
Juniper says...



Katema! June here!

Awww! How cute! A wolf!

Finally, a not so creepy animal drawing by you, haha!

Hm, take a look at the right, raised paw. Something about it-- perhaps the lighter part of it that shows the toes is a bit off. I think it should meet the top of the foot just like the other side, dear.

The tail is cute! It's nice and fluffly :D. Nice job with the shading!

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Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:48 am
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That's really cool, but it looks kind of Disneyish. You know, fluffy and happy. Also, the tail makes it look like a squirrel. But it is still really impressive for being done on the computer. Did you make it in Paint? If so I am really impressed, because its hard to draw detail on Paint. I especially like the shading, but it could use more gradient.
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Sun Mar 08, 2009 5:42 pm
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elizajoe wrote:That's really cool, but it looks kind of Disneyish. You know, fluffy and happy. Also, the tail makes it look like a squirrel. But it is still really impressive for being done on the computer. Did you make it in Paint? If so I am really impressed, because its hard to draw detail on Paint. I especially like the shading, but it could use more gradient.


Um... no I did not make it on paint. I made it on this thing called: Corel painter essentials. It is for free!1!!
And plus, I do these on a mac and macs dont have paint. :D
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:56 pm
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OOH! I like it! That is good for a fast picture! I think you should shade better, though. and put highlights, and make it more detailed..... but oh well its good. its good. its good. its good. it s good. its good. its good. its good. its good . its good. its good . its good. its good. its good. its good. its good. its good. i ts good. its good. YA Unlike all you freaks, I like the tal when its nice and fluffy. Oh! Katemabob, make a bigger head, please. :)
  








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