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Okay, so I've been doing this for a friend. Its the twilight poster. *And the anti-twilighters groan*

I like his face; I'm going to go over the shading with an 8b and make it all darker and vampiric and make the rest of his face paler. But Kristen Stewarts face...erughh....Its all rubbed out because whenever I draw her she ALWAYS looks like a rabbit. I know the nose is too thin and the mouth is lopsided but what else?? And the hair needs fixing too.

Please can I have your advice on this, because I cant give this to Errin until its done, and I wont be satisfied with it until it's perfect, because I'm just wierd that way.

So...help? Tips? Advice?
Ill love you forever.
xxx

Wow! I love this. The shading is excellent and it is so beautiful! Great job!

Woah. I like it; it has this haunting kind of atmosphere to it.

Love it!

Nariel

something is up with bellas eye... O.o

Oooo....nice!!

Yay Twilight! and..Bella looks a little old, could you ease up the wrinkly shadings?

Uhm, well, I'm not sure which poster you did it from because there's a lot out there, but just by looking at it, the lips are a bit too 'girly' for him- and by the way, I'm looking at the poster on the movie page (the countdown thing). He looks like he doesn't have a side of his head, and his left eye (or the one you can actually see, that is) looks a bit...scary. Maybe it needs more shading.

So far, on Bella's face, it looks pretty good. You draw noses very well- I guess that's your strong point. Mine are usually the eyes.

Good job. =D
But...

First: Edward's lips. They're... too big for a guy. Too... puffy.
Second: I don't know if this was done on purpose, but you can't really see Edward's ear, which isn't the biggest deal in the world, but you might want to try to fix it. Make it a touch more pronounced, like its actually there, and not just a white... blob.
Third: Edward's left eye. It's... not there. Three quarters of a face IS difficult to draw, I know all about that, but you should at least TRY to draw it.
Fourth: His right eye looks... possessed. You might want to shade it a bit more. =P

Really...
That's about it.
I love Bella, she looks REALLY good.
For Edward, I'm not saying do a complete make-over on him, he's really good, but just keep those things in mind when you go over it.
This is definately WAY better than I could do.
Good job!
Kudos.

I think Bella looks really awesome, I do think Edward's lips look off, though. too big and pronounced. But besides that, this is absolutely fantastic. You relaly have talent. I would never be able to draw that well! Good Job. -thumbs up-

*Uber Jealousy*

I can't draw people that well yet.

>.>

edward's lips look a tad full and awkward but besides that it was amazing. if I hadnt seen the title I could have completly told what it was. I acutally got a little bit exctited because when ever some one draws this posted it always comes out looking a tad bit weird, but this is really awesome. I love seeing your drawings and keep it up! Maybe I could get a few tips! ha ha! Great drawing.

I am an anti-Twilight person, but I really like this (as a piece of art lol)

On Edward:
-The shading is excellent
-His hairline looks too far back... maybe it's just me
-I know everyone said this, but his lips are way too full.

On Bella:
-Excellently drawn, really. It's just amazing.
-Um, she needs an eye XD
-her head seems big in proportion to Edward's.

You are a very good artist!

Hope this helped,
Sakura

I can't draw but I can pick out flaws when I see them.


Bella:

-her head is just a bit big compared to Edward's
-her eyes are a little off
-she looks a little too old to be Bella; I think it is just her eyes
-darken up her outline, it looked like she and Edward where conjoined


Edward:

-his lips are way too full
-he doesn't look very vampiric
-give him more of a dark, sinister smirk
-darken his outline too

You are really good! (So jealous)

I think you have some major potential to become a renowned artist.

Excellent!!

I love Bella's hair and lips. Something just doesn't seem right with Edward's face though. I don't quite know what's wrong, but there is something. But, nice drawing, I really like it.

You are REALLY good! I wish i could do shading like that!
The only thing that kinda bugs me is his eyes, i think that if you add a little darker shading to them, they will be perfect!
AMAZING WORK!
I can't wait to see more!