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So, this is my sketch of "Earring Eevee." I was inspired by an image I found and I recreated it, free hand. I added my own originality to it as well. Hope you like it!

Well I don't know much about Pokemon, but this looks good from what I've seen of them. What originality did you add, out of curiosity?

Well, the original Eevee didn't have two tails. She also didn't have the earring and bracelets.

This makes me think of Neopets for some weird reason...lol
This is very good for freehand, I think. I like how you gave it an overall 'cute' look but managed to add a mischevious expression. The right tail looks a bit odd, and the feet are positioned awkwardly. I'm not sure about the nose, but something just doesn't look right.
You should probably also post the image you used as a reference.
Overall, though. I like it! 'Tis cute.


*anti-pop

Thank you! I agree, the nose doesn't seem right and the right paw is awkward...but I don't understand what is wrong about the tail...?

By the way, can anyone tell me how to put two attachments onto one thread?

The ears are too big and dangly.

Your Eevee kind of resembles a rabbit, it should look more fox-like.

Cute. You draw a little bit like a friend of mine.
I think I know what's wrong with the nose. The top line of the triangle is tilted downward a little bit, and it should be tilted up slightly.

I think the right tail looks a little flat on the top.

It's left eye (our right) is a little bigger than the other.

Other than that, I liked it!

-Sea-

Awwwwww pokemon!! Pikacu is the best! This is really good an the eyes are cute. But i do think you could improve on the tail.

Love

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AAAAH! I'm soo confused! People keep telling me something is wrong with the tails but I can't figure out what it is!!!

I think you need to make it look fluffyer.

If you really like Pikachu, you should see my other sketch. It's called Team Rocket Pk

Okay. I think I can help you with the tail. The first little tuft is too tall and not connected enough to the rest of the tail. The second tuft needs to stick up just a little more. Try to make the tail come to more of a point, sort of like a fox's.
Hope I helped!

-Sea-

Evees don't have two tails.

I know. I was inspired by an Eevee pic and I drew it, adding my own originality to it. I added a tail, earring, and bracelets

This is cute! Lol, want me to color it? Lol...j/k. Haha... I really like it. There are a few things, though...

- The toes of the right paw are kinda...messed up...a little...
- The first fluff of the right tail is too far apart from the second and third one. Try to put another one in between the first and second ones.
- Something about the mouth is weird...I dunno. Maybe some whisker dots or something may help. May make it a little cuter ^^
- I know it sounds kind of crazy...but some kind of eyebrows might help some, too. I know it sounds kinda weird, but when I draw an animal and I don't put eyebrows, it looks weird. Then I add just a little line in some kind of curved formation above each eye and it looks better n_n Not saying it looks bad, or weird, or anything, but it might help.

Other than that, it looks really cute. I love the mischievous feeling about it...the expression is just so perfect. Excellent