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Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:26 am
Sohini says...



Grand photo, it sure has a magical aura about it...
Calvin : You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes : What mood is that?
Calvin : Last-minute panic.
  





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Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:31 am
Shine says...



Wow thats just awesome,with the background its just seriously wow!!
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Wed Oct 10, 2007 11:27 am
Someguy says...



I love this picture! I love the colour. Really cool. :)
Look at my big shiny shell...
  





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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:38 pm
Frederick101 says...



this is good. but thats a big fire, whats burning? a house or something?
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Thu Oct 11, 2007 7:12 pm
ibelieve_inme says...



The second person's head isn't lost in darkness....its a fro! lol Sorry for the confusion - - - Thanks for all the crit tho, I greatly appreciate it!!!
I open my mouth to sing, and you can see right through me.
I open my eyes to see, And I’m invisible
I look around me to take in my surroundings
And I disappear - And then the words begin...
  








Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality