This is really good. The outfits look awesome, the lack of colour works really well and I think you have a very unique drawing style. It's a very sweet little cartoon and I congratulate you on your effort at drawing their hands. I always struggle when trying to imitate two hands clasped together but you've done a good job.
Looks very cool, reminds of the Simpsons, only not stupid. They look kinda scared of each other, and their lips aren't really touching. Cute nonetheless.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?" ----Stupei, Ace Defective
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