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Kid Fariy



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Thu Jun 28, 2007 1:10 am
JustLaugh says...



Here ya go
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:42 am
Saphira says...



I don't like it as much as the other fairies but it is still really good. I like the position and the detail on the wings though you still need to look at the proportions. Also the hair doesn't seem to blend with the picture. The clothes are good.
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:24 pm
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Rydia says...



This one is okay but that branch is way too thin to hold her weight and the outfit is a bit funny. The detail of the wings are nice though not as good as some of your others and I'd suggest moving the right wing down a bit so it's more symmetrical. Other than that, the hat is sweet but you should at least attempt a face. Why not have a look at how various artists do their sketches? See if you can replicate the way they draw faces and then adapt it to suit your own style and the character you're drawing. I'm sure you could manage it. Well good luck,

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Thu Jun 28, 2007 4:02 pm
JustLaugh says...



Ok, thank you! But i have a question, what hair?
The outfit is that way on purpose, i guess it is weird in a way, but o well.
I don't draw faces, cause i can't yet. Right now i am learning, I want to, and soon will be able to, I hope. Right now my faces make my drawings look stupid, and trust me, they are better without them for now!
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Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:34 am
Alice says...



Very cool, but may I say that its kind of out of porportion? The chest/body is way too long for a kid.
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Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:36 am
LowKey says...



yeah...
I can't see it. It just says:
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