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Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:58 pm
cheripop says...



Hey, this is something I did for my art class--It's just a pencil drawing. What I like about this is that the guy is straight up ugly, and it totally creeps me out.

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Tue Jun 05, 2007 6:31 pm
Via says...



It's pretty good. The mouth/chin area is a little awkward. I would make the eyes the same color (even with light on one they are still a little closer to the same color) and the right ear (...my right) is a little odd in the shadows even though there is clearly like on that side.

But yes, very creepy.
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Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:30 pm
Sponson Light says...



yeah, creepy. Like some shady dealer.
Is his face drawn vertically smooshed or is it just the picture?
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Wed Jun 06, 2007 1:17 am
Snoink says...



Hahaha, he is ugly. The only thing I think is weird is the angle... either were looking at him from the top or his is abnormally squashed. O_o
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Wed Jun 06, 2007 6:12 am
Rydia says...



I was sort of thinking about that Snoink but he is very creepy and well drawn.
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Wed Jun 06, 2007 8:24 am
Myth says...



He looks blind in the left eye, viewers' right. Looks a little squashed and the nose is far bigger than anything else. Very creepy.
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Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:26 pm
Fand says...



Haha... he is really creepy! The whole smooshed thing definitely increases his creepy-factor, as does, as Myth pointed out, the fact that he seems to be blind in one eye. Nice shading, too!
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Sat Jun 16, 2007 11:55 am
Pushca says...



*is creeped*
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Sat Jun 16, 2007 4:47 pm
electricbluemonkey says...



He looks like a bushbaby.

A sneaky bushbaby.
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Sat Jun 16, 2007 8:39 pm
whence says...



proportions are way off...
but it rather adds to the effect, doesn't it?

So I'll just assume that was the intent, and go on being rather unnerved by it/him/bushbaby
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Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:25 pm
cheripop says...



Yeah, this drawing is really crazy :D --but there's one thing I didn't mention about it. I didn't just draw it for my art class, but I actually won 100 dollars for it at a local art festival. I think the visual horror is worth it :wink:
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Tue Jun 26, 2007 3:55 am
JustLaugh says...



Yeah, as they said its a little creepy, but i like it, alot!
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Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:38 am
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Alice says...



The head is a little bit streched sideways, but he is ugly and creepy. (That face may fuel my night mares for a while)
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Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:06 pm
Shadowsun says...



It's great, but the face is a bit stretched and the eyes are differant colours. Apart from that it's great! Keep on drawing.

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