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Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:15 pm
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CharityDawn says...



Unspoken words are the poison that stills my blood and decays my bones. Like detached spider legs: still twitching after their painful demise.

These unspoken words stayed at the tip of my tongue, where they patiently waited. Anticipating the moment they could crawl to my fingertips to be released in an explosion of ink.

But these unspoken words were neglected for tight hugs and busy days. They’ve been left to shrivel up and die in a world without air.

Only now do I grasp my pen tightly, gently releasing a thought at a time. I’m risking everything right here.

But how else will I learn to fly?

Spoiler! :
I'm not exactly sure what this is... ramblings... possibly the source of my writer's block. The reason I've been so lost.
*we wear our scarves just like a noose,
but not 'cause we want eternal sleep.*
  





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Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:46 am
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AubrielRose says...



We don't choose to be writers. Personally, I see it as a punishment, that we spend our lives plagued by these thoughts.
So what I'm trying to say is I get what you mean entirely.
  





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Sun Jan 08, 2012 9:24 pm
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TinyDancer says...



This was goreous, my friend :) You have a gift. And if this is what happens WITH writer's block, I really want to know how you write without it haha! The allusion to spider legs gave me chills because, oh my goodness, it's so true. I have nothing bad to say at all. You are so talented. Great style and phrasing and flow. It was perfect and relatable. Good job!

~Jess
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No announcements precede it.
It is simply there,
When yesterday it was not.”

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