Young Writers Society

Click here to join my page for my first ever novel, The Lockets, or else live with the harassing guilt of declining a simple request by an aspiring writer named Jash Bagabaldo. Okay, if that threat didn't work, I'll just say: "PLEASE?" *Pretty eyes* =)

And here goes nothing:

Please click here to watch video.

START READING IT. CLICK HERE!

I appreciate reviews. XD

~~

SONG: I honestly forgot, I'll get to that. But I cut it so it'll fit in 1 minute.
MUSIC EDITING PROGRAM: Acid Xpress by Sony (it's free!)
VOICE ACTRESS: whoop..secret. XD Yes, it's suckish 'cause it's me.
VIDEO EDITING PROGRAM: Sony Vegas 30-day-trial (which I only used for 2 weeks). *sniff* I miss it already.
PICTURES: devianart.com!!!
FIRE: detonation films.com (but I had to figure out on my own how to make it blue! LOL)
SCRIPT: Me. =)

Please read spoiler. XD



Here are the screenshots. =)) It just looks complicated, but it's not. XD

Jash, that was amazing! I love the voice! Very beautiful sounding! Is that yours? If it is, I so envy you! And the graphics, words, and music were great! i can't wait to read your novel!

Wowie, Jash!
That was an amazing trailer for your novel. I want one too! D: How did you make it? It's beautiful and it raises suspense and mystery. Hmm, nice.
The song was great, it gave me chills and the voices were also perfect. The words matched brilliantly and I loved the ending. Great! I'm envious! 8D

-Shear

Good Job, jashie!

Holy Penguins (taken from my husband)

That was awesome Jash! Like Pinky said, the music gave me chills, the words were beautiful and haunting.

Wowwee! Very nicely done. I want you to post more of the lockets now

Mom

Jashhhy!!!!

Man, how did you do that? It was awesome in every way-as mom and dad have rightly said. Do not ignore them, or we would have to drink that weird soup again. *blinks* Okay, so it was cool, as it is I love trailers of movies. But the thing is how did you do that? I would love to do one for my stupid novel, too. Good work.

~Shubhi

Obviously, I can't review this... not properly anyway!

I'll begin by saying that this is really epic, Jashy! Another thing you're clearly talented at is creating videos, along with the drawing, singing, playing an instrument and writing.

I think it's a really clever idea to make a trailer for your novel, and you've done it very well. Everything form the music to the pictures made the video as great as a whole. One thing I want to ask though is how on earth you made it. It's very clever. xD






Keep doing what you're doing!

xoxo Skins



EDIT: The crazy review I promised you

It's clear from the pictures you used, PinkShearwater and borntobeawriter's immortality mind games are working on you. They show tribal references and soul sucking cabbages, as you can clearly see. The music in the video implies that the bath towels were, in fact used during the immortality ceremony to wash the blood of life out of you, leaving nothing but sombre hatred and possession. As for the voice of the video... your 'parents' as you call them have obviously magically changed your voice, your accent, your tone. Everything. Therefore, all you have left is a shadowed mirror of yourself.

The moral of this story is... YOU IS POSSESSED.

People! Thank you so much! XD I can't believe you guys actually liked it. =))

To those who are wondering how I did this, I've edited my post and revealed my secret. LOL kidd' no secret. really. =))

Skins! What happens in the pact of SILENCE must remain SILENT!

And Shubhi, that soup? YOU made it! *grins*

This is really, really cool! My little brothers thought that it was done by a professional. So, yeah, really awesome. But I do think you did the words a little to fast. Sometimes I had to pause it to read it. But, besides that, love it!

Just thought I would say it would be really cool if maybe for the first chapter you did it audiobook style but with pictures like you did there. Basically you do everything normal like a narrator/audiobook guy, but make a video that has pictures and the words similar to this one.

To whoever clicked the like button again. THank you!

As for Day, I really didn't get what you wanted to say. May you please repeat!? Thank you! XD

Oh my gosh. This is amazing! I like how you had the voice overs. It made me want to read the novel and that's what you're looking for. Great job!

Since this isn't an actual chapter in your novel, I'm moving it to Other.

Evi wrote:Since this isn't an actual chapter in your novel, I'm moving it to Other.

But ma'am, I wanted connected to my work. =((