While I really enjoyed it I won't lie and tell you it was absolutly hysterical or totally awesome, it wasn't. It was good though. I felt you missed alot of great opportunities since you seemed to spend alot of time at the start than fly through to the end. Honestly the best parts are the side moments like the talking snowman and ones that tied indirectly into the film (potion notes), showed great humor and creativity. I know it's a twitter but some posts ignore punctuation completely and others are really strict, so that bugged me.
Also would love to see the twitters from accounts other than harry, would be a very nice touch if you mixed them all in. Something like voldemort texting after losing to harry would be pretty lolworthy.
Overall a solid piece with some great moments of humor and truly original. This is the first and only semi fanfic I've ever bothered to finish.
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