Young Writers Society

jashbagabaldo wrote:

Evi wrote:Since this isn't an actual chapter in your novel, I'm moving it to Other.

But ma'am, I wanted connected to my work. =((

You've got the link for your page, and you can link it to the novel/on the page/in your sig! Novels is for text/chapters only. ^^

That is awesome!

I love the video, and I'm really curious about the story now.

If I were to critique I would say if you had some photography skills it would probably be better to get your own pictures. Most of them look really good, but it kind of shows that you've taken them off an art site. Maybe some consistency in their styles or themes.

Good work though! I don't think I've seen anything like this on yws, or any of my other regular browsing sites actually, it's interesting, and very well put together. You did a good job on the voice cover too!

Wow, that looks really complected. How long did it take for you to do that?

Rosey Unicorn wrote:

jashbagabaldo wrote:

Evi wrote:Since this isn't an actual chapter in your novel, I'm moving it to Other.

But ma'am, I wanted connected to my work. =((

You've got the link for your page, and you can link it to the novel/on the page/in your sig! Novels is for text/chapters only. ^^

Okay, I understand. =)

Wow . This is great! I like the way you put this together, but I wish you would have slowed it down a little bit. Now I'm gonna read your novel this weekend.

One word:AMAZING!!!! DDDDDDD

Sorry for the caps, but this is actually very good for a trailer. Mine would be me actually filming it with geeks wearing boxes on their heads and playing with light sabers. LOL

Please PM me or drop by the profile if you have anything else to do with this (: thanks.
-Kirst

yay! thanks guys. =))

Hi Jash.

That was chilling to watch. I hope your novels match the epicness of that trailer. You can't imagine the anticipation I'm feeling right now :3

- Jai

seeminglymeaningless wrote:Hi Jash.

That was chilling to watch. I hope your novels match the epicness of that trailer. You can't imagine the anticipation I'm feeling right now :3

- Jai

YAO! Now I am nervous. O_O

I am in everyway totally jealous. That's great! Especially since I haven't read a chapter of your novel in my life.

Iiscraftywriter wrote:I am in everyway totally jealous. That's great! Especially since I haven't read a chapter of your novel in my life.

Well, I think I will disappoint you. O_o

Oh my goodness! A trailer for a novel? It's REALLY good; not just the trailor, but the plot of your story, it really made me want to read it. You are surely gifted for many things and you should expect me to comment on your other works because you have really impressed me (though I am not that hard to impress, but you really have)!
I love everything about it: The music, voice, suspense....GOOD WORK!!

Whoa. You have the goods, baby.
Really nice trailer for the book. It seems like a really interesting plot.
I may just look into it...
lol
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-jojo.

thanks guys! =D/

It still is connected to your work lol.

Anyway, that was such an epic trailer. *thumbs up* The only thing that quite failed was the fire and snow effects at the 'Sapphire Blaze' and 'Silver Glaze', specifically the fire effects. xD Nevermind that.

I'm loving that thing that wrote in red at the beginning of your SB&SG: TL posts. xD