[i need work on my character descriptions, so I'm using this post to develop them. feel free to comment on them; I'll be posting several as time goes on so look out fro them. thanks.]
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She was a surfer at heart; a pretty Californian girl who was laid-back and easy-going. Her face was lightly dusted with tiny freckles which were only visible close-up. Her hair was naturally brown but had been bleached due to hours in the sun, giving it an almost blonde hue. She didn't like to straighten it, but rather scrunch it and leave it loosely tied back. She was slender, and a fairly average height, for which she felt she was very lucky; she didn't think she was ugly but she didn't like to say so, as many of her friends were always complaining of their dissatisfaction with their own features. She had her own style- sometimes boho-surfer like, and other times more casual and grungy. She liked being herself. She had no siblings, which most likely accounted for her mature attitude, and she was quiet and shy; which the local boys didn't seem to like. She liked to wake up early on Sunday mornings and sit on the balcony looking at the waves gently lapping at the beach shore. She was a wallflower, and a bit of a klutz.- not outgoing until she warmed up to someone. Then she could be a lot of fun. She hated school but went anyway; never rebellious or insolent, always doing what she was told. She never smoked and hated people who did; her parents let her try alcohol once but she genuinely hated the taste. She lived less than a minute's walk out of the town borders, but none of her close friends lived in the town so she kept to herself. She longed to be accepted, and to be invited to parties and sleepovers, but until then she would just carry on with her day-to-day life.
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