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Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:06 am
Ross says...



Well, I am running very quickly out of room in my NaNo. I've hit 10K and I'm in 3/4 of the story. Any ideas to stretch it out (to 50K?)
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Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:17 am
Prokaryote says...



Add pictures; each one is worth one thousand words.

Amateur. :roll:

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Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:31 am
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Wha--seriously?
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Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:37 am
Prokaryote says...



Yep. Check the website.

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Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:13 pm
miyaviloves says...



Dialogue. Get them to speak, LOTS. ABout nothing, just fill in the gaps - its the whole point of Nano and although it might make no sense and is just random stuff it brings yor word count up right? ;)

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Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:30 pm
KailaMarie says...



Describe EVERYTHING. It could get boring for the reader, but you can always edit out the excess after NaNo, and then you might have a better idea of what things look like in your head even.
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Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:26 pm
Rydia says...



Think of a sequel and write that as well but then just combine them both into one book =)
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Wed Nov 12, 2008 12:52 am
GryphonFledgling says...



:)

I've got the exact opposite problem... I'm at 26k and I'm not 1/4 of the way through the (incomplete) outliney-type list of events I want to happen. It's going to be a long novel, let me tell you...

My tip would be to pad. Describe everything, as Kalia said. It is tedious to read, but if you want to hit the wordcount and you are confident in the story, it shouldn't matter. Also, do not use contractions. Rather than writing "doesn't", write "does not". It's a two-for-one deal! (Actually, I've been doing this so much in my NaNo that I'm having a hard time using contractions in my other writing. It's a weird feeling being able to use the apostrophe. :?)

Anyway, good luck! And congrats on being so far into the story!

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Wed Nov 12, 2008 2:14 am
ankhirke says...



give all your minor characters complex backgrounds, and work them into the story every time you mention them.

:)

It's actually quite fun.

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