Lol. That's bad! My character eats occasionally but then, I tend to skip around with time anyway so I glaze over the sections where she's eating or doing something really dull.
Maybe when I edit I'll fix it... or I can just have my characters starve to death... Just kidding. Right now I'm on the seond part of my story and working on afight scene and you don't much see people eating while they fight.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover, To beautify him only lacks a cover.” ~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Like Kitty said, though, if it's not an important part of the story, then you don't really have to put it in. Like I never say when my characters go to the bathroom, it's just implied because they're human.
A couple of my characters are actually supposed to be starving to death... so... they don't eat much. But, in their POV, I'm constantly talking about food. It's all they think about, though they never eat.
My other characters DO eat, but because I have time skips as well, I sometimes tend to skim over the boring parts. I figure I can always add something in later, if it's necessary...
Good point. I guess since I do have scene skips I do't have to add it because it really doesn't agree with the action/adventure parts in it. Thanks guys.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.
“This precious book of love, this unbound lover, To beautify him only lacks a cover.” ~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
I broke one of my character's arms in the second chapter and totally forgot about it. Now, just a week later in the storyline, she is fighting as if it had not happened, which, to me apparently, it never had. I just realized this as I was skimming through what I already had written.
Although, by amazing coincidence (*oogles at the amazing coinkydink*), I wrote in recently that one of the other characters has noticed what they think to be an old injury to her wrist that is all but crippling it. Now, I just need to tweak it a bit so that what they think is the old injury is actually her broken arm that I forgot about.
haha, in my story it was raining, and then her friend came over, and they were about to go sunbathing... in the rain? I made it so it cleared up just in time. haha.
I forgot about a character for aggges, like one minute my main guy was with three of them, then Ijust forgot about one! I Don't even know why! He was just abandoned and I felt bad for doing it Still I went back and he is now very much in the story now!
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