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PART 1
Spoiler! :
EXT. TANGIN MANOR, 2013 - DAY
It is the year 2013. An old Manor and estate in the English countryside - from above. There is a main building, several smaller outbuildings, a little pond. CU on a graveyard with a small chapel- complete with several creepy-mostly-eroded statues. A sign proclaims the estate to be TANGIN MANOR.
INT. FIONA'S DRESSING ROOM - DAY
Lady FIONA Tangin, 50, and FREDERIC, 54 prepare for their wedding. Fiona adjusts Frederic's bow tie and generally bustles around him; Frederic is slightly muddled.
INT. HALLWAY - MYSTERY POV - DAY
The camera is low to the ground- at knee level. The shot is from the POV of a mystery CREATURE that lurks outside Fiona and Frederic's room, looking in. There is a mechanical buzzing and ticking sound. The Creature watches for a few seconds, then buzzes along the hallway and up a flight of stairs. It stops outside the open door to Eudora's room.
INT. EUDORA's ROOM - DAY
EUDORA, 28, (Fiona's daughter) frantically grooms VANCE, 29, her "manservant". Vance is not thrilled. All of Eudora's jackets have 3/4 sleeves. She is unknowingly mirroring her mother's movements as she attempts to fix Vance's hair. As she speaks, Eudora aggressively attacks his skull for emphasis.
Vance sighs, but goes to the dresser to get the pearls.
INT. HALLWAY - MYSTERY POV - DAY
The CREATURE watches VANCE as he moves towards the door.
FX: From the POV of The Creature, humans look as if they're glowing with golden light.
As Vance approaches, The Creature backs out of view. Vance picks up the necklace and hands it to EUDORA. The Creature come closer again.
FX: The sound of the TARDIS landing.
Eudora looks around for the source of the sound. She goes to the door. The Creature shrinks back. She sees nothing, so she goes to the window and sticks her head out.
EXT. TANGIN MANOR - DAY
We see EUDORA's head out of a third story window of the Manor.
FIONA's head sticks out of a window below and to the left of Eudora.
VANCE sticks his head out the window, next to Eudora
Beat. Fiona notices what Eudora has done to Vance's hair.
Everyone goes back inside.
EXT. TANGIN MANOR GARDENS - DAY
FX: The TARDIS materializes.
THE DOCTOR steps out, and looks around bemused.
THEME SONG
It is the year 2013. An old Manor and estate in the English countryside - from above. There is a main building, several smaller outbuildings, a little pond. CU on a graveyard with a small chapel- complete with several creepy-mostly-eroded statues. A sign proclaims the estate to be TANGIN MANOR.
CUT TO:
INT. FIONA'S DRESSING ROOM - DAY
Lady FIONA Tangin, 50, and FREDERIC, 54 prepare for their wedding. Fiona adjusts Frederic's bow tie and generally bustles around him; Frederic is slightly muddled.
FIONA
Frederic dear, do try and stand still, will you? You're making this incredibly difficult.
(She fixes his shirt collar)
We can't afford to have any mistakes.
FREDERIC
Yes, love.
FIONA
Mind you, that might be difficult with your poster child of a dysfunctional family.
(She sighs dramatically)
I suppose we'll manage as long as we can keep Uncle Conor away from the whiskey.
FREDERIC
Of course, love.
Frederic dear, do try and stand still, will you? You're making this incredibly difficult.
(She fixes his shirt collar)
We can't afford to have any mistakes.
FREDERIC
Yes, love.
FIONA
Mind you, that might be difficult with your poster child of a dysfunctional family.
(She sighs dramatically)
I suppose we'll manage as long as we can keep Uncle Conor away from the whiskey.
FREDERIC
Of course, love.
CUT TO:
INT. HALLWAY - MYSTERY POV - DAY
The camera is low to the ground- at knee level. The shot is from the POV of a mystery CREATURE that lurks outside Fiona and Frederic's room, looking in. There is a mechanical buzzing and ticking sound. The Creature watches for a few seconds, then buzzes along the hallway and up a flight of stairs. It stops outside the open door to Eudora's room.
CUT TO:
INT. EUDORA's ROOM - DAY
EUDORA, 28, (Fiona's daughter) frantically grooms VANCE, 29, her "manservant". Vance is not thrilled. All of Eudora's jackets have 3/4 sleeves. She is unknowingly mirroring her mother's movements as she attempts to fix Vance's hair. As she speaks, Eudora aggressively attacks his skull for emphasis.
EUDORA
I can't believe her Vance - Comb -
(Vance hands her a comb)
Getting married in my father's Manor - Gel -
(Vance hands her a bottle of hair gel)
And him in my father's suit no less - Pin -
(Vance hands her a bobby pin)
Poor Frederic. Married to a... a black widow spider. That's what she is. She captured him in her web of evil seduction. Vance! Could you try and stay still for a minute?
VANCE
Yes, miss.
EUDORA
And the worst bit is, is that she only married him for his money. The way she abuses him- you'd think he was her slave, not her husband! Vance - get my pearls will you?
I can't believe her Vance - Comb -
(Vance hands her a comb)
Getting married in my father's Manor - Gel -
(Vance hands her a bottle of hair gel)
And him in my father's suit no less - Pin -
(Vance hands her a bobby pin)
Poor Frederic. Married to a... a black widow spider. That's what she is. She captured him in her web of evil seduction. Vance! Could you try and stay still for a minute?
VANCE
Yes, miss.
EUDORA
And the worst bit is, is that she only married him for his money. The way she abuses him- you'd think he was her slave, not her husband! Vance - get my pearls will you?
Vance sighs, but goes to the dresser to get the pearls.
CUT TO:
INT. HALLWAY - MYSTERY POV - DAY
The CREATURE watches VANCE as he moves towards the door.
FX: From the POV of The Creature, humans look as if they're glowing with golden light.
As Vance approaches, The Creature backs out of view. Vance picks up the necklace and hands it to EUDORA. The Creature come closer again.
FX: The sound of the TARDIS landing.
Eudora looks around for the source of the sound. She goes to the door. The Creature shrinks back. She sees nothing, so she goes to the window and sticks her head out.
CUT TO:
EXT. TANGIN MANOR - DAY
We see EUDORA's head out of a third story window of the Manor.
EUDORA
Mum!
Mum!
FIONA's head sticks out of a window below and to the left of Eudora.
EUDORA (CON't)
What was that?
FIONA
That idiot gardener must have left the lawnmower on again. You know how those immigrants are.
EUDORA
Mum!
(Appalled)
"That idiot gardener" has a name.
FIONA
Yes, I know dear, but I can't pronounce it. Vance!
What was that?
FIONA
That idiot gardener must have left the lawnmower on again. You know how those immigrants are.
EUDORA
Mum!
(Appalled)
"That idiot gardener" has a name.
FIONA
Yes, I know dear, but I can't pronounce it. Vance!
VANCE sticks his head out the window, next to Eudora
VANCE
Yes, ma'am?
FIONA
Tell the gardener to stop that blasted noise, won't you?
VANCE
Yes, ma'am.
Yes, ma'am?
FIONA
Tell the gardener to stop that blasted noise, won't you?
VANCE
Yes, ma'am.
Beat. Fiona notices what Eudora has done to Vance's hair.
FIONA
What happened to you hair?
VANCE
(sighing)
Nothing ma'am.
What happened to you hair?
VANCE
(sighing)
Nothing ma'am.
Everyone goes back inside.
CUT TO:
EXT. TANGIN MANOR GARDENS - DAY
FX: The TARDIS materializes.
THE DOCTOR steps out, and looks around bemused.
THE DOCTOR
Right. Well then.
Right. Well then.
THEME SONG
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