Young Writers Society

Scavengers (Scene Ten)

[Slow-Motion: Adrian carries Cody's body down the staircase, and walks past the camera. We cut to him taking Calvin's pulse. He looks up at the man beside him and shakes his head. We cut to him walking towards a gravestone. He stops in front of it, and lays down a single flower on the top of the stone]

(Fade to End Credits)

Short, I know, but I had to end it somehow. Hope you enjoyed. I expect filming to start soon, and to end sometime in June or July. You'll be able to find it at my Youtube page, http://www.youtube.com/user/VasticityStudios, or my Dailymotion page. http://www.dailymotion.com/VasticityStudios. Thanks for all your kind words.

Awww, poor CODY!

I will definietly watch it! It was short and I can't really do a full review but I think it's a good ending.

Hi.

No exclamation marks like usual, because I'm just not in the mood. I went back and re-read the last couple of scenes, and I just want to comment on how powerful it is. This scene is a perfect example that things don't need to be long to be beautiful. This is exactly what this work is-beautiful.

One thing that I didn't like was the slow motion tag. I know you've got your own idea of what it should be like, but to me it would just seem kind of cheesy and kill the powerful effect.

I really did like it, and I can't wait to watch it. I'm subscribing to your videos so I can catch it when it comes around.

My Rating: 10/10

PM me if you have questions.

-Elinor xo