Young Writers Society

Hi!

You nailed it... This was hysterical.

I love how Jacob is sulking in the corner.

You really got everything without seeming overdone. I can't wait to read the other ones!

You should start an anti-twilight club, just to counter the fifty million pro-twilight clubs. (JK!!!)

Gold Star!

~Lupis

Hahahaha oh my goodness!

You're brilliant! I love Twilight Parodies like this because I know so many Twilight loves and tons more haters!

I worship you!

-Irish

HAHAHA!!!!! I love this twilight parodies, they're the best. This one was sick, I totally loved it. I can't review, i'ts was way tooo funny to check any mistakes or it was just "flawless".well anyways, extremely hilarious. OMG!! I can read this over and over ( no,I better not do that, It'll loose it's humor.)
You rock!!

Hi
I just got told off for laughing so much and its all your fault!!!!!
I'm joking. I love this script, I'm a Twilight lover but I think what you wrote her is so funny. I love the way you added yourself into the script.
midnightread

That was great! I loved the fact that you put Stephanie in the story. She definitely used the same words over, and over, and over, and over, and...you get my gist? I loved how she popped in and ruined your script Really good.

Keep writing!
~Jessey

Haha, nice. *sigghhhh* I got caught up in the Twilight series for like...three days. My parents bought the books and I had to read them (they're books, I'm an obsessive reader...I have a problem, okay?!) But, like you, I realized the whole was a bunch of plotless nothingness and that Breaking Dawn was an even bigger letdown than the others books of the series. Love how you portrayed Stephanie Meyer; the slightly (but hardly) exaggerated personalities of the characters was hilarious too. I think I like your re-write better than the actual series!

This is absolutely hilarious. I was laughing my head off the WHOLE time. I don't think anyone can review this, it's hard to look for grammar/ spelling or whatever mistakes when you're laughing you're head off. Simply HILARIOUSS!

Skutter11: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!! <Thud>
Janitor: Oh, great! Now I have to carry this smiling body out as well!
Skutter11: I'm not dead I'm in a laughing induced coma, you would be too, if you read this
Janitor looks at script and dies laughing.

Sorry 'bout that. It's just that I thought it was funny!

Hey there

I have no idea whatsoever about scripts, but this was pretty darn immense!

To be perfectly honest, I don't really care about all of the grammar, the techniques and all of that junk. I just want to say that your script was hysterical!

I myself don't actually mind Twilight that much. In fact, I actually like the books. Luckily for you, I'm not one of those obsessive, sad fans, so I simply find this funny as hell! I love how you used the characters personalities and exaggerated them, making them even funnier than they already were!

I was actually laughing out loud reading this!

Please do another one!
Otherwise, I will be over your house with my water pistol. Hell yeah. I'd go there.

xoxo Skins

HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHHAA
This is HILARIOUSSS! Not such a big fan of Meyer and not at all of Bella!
Looved it!
x

LOL!
I liked this.
I actually started laughing when Bella makes Edward apologize to Jacob, who is dead.
Ahh, nice parody.

It's really funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But while I was rolling on the ground lauphing and reading(by the way not a good combination) I read when SM came it sort of mad the parody suck. KEEP DOING PARODIES!!!!!!!!!!

have lot's of fun!!!!!!!

Absolutely hilarious! Fantastic way to satirise one of the biggest and most soppiest and half-witted and predictable novel/movie franchises in the 21st century by using cliches Meyer created her and using them against her.
I absolutely loved it. I haven’t read the books or seen the movies, and I also refuse to. But this - this just sums it up.
I wouldn’t mind seeing this on TV for some comedy sketch program like Double Take or something. Such fun and what a joy to read. Keep up the good work!

Oh my God I am so going to die laughing now.