Young Writers Society

I wish my mad mind could be as creative as yours
"I'm a ballerina" weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Liked it mucho
Sarah
xxx

I loved edward going "I MUST PROTECT HER" That was just stephenie meyer perfect! Great great great!

My dad told me to shut up, because it's late and I was laughing so loud, it woke up my little brother. That was the funniest thing since my best friend ran into a locker On the first day of school.
Love it, love it!!!!!!!!!! LOL

...And here I was wondering what Snoinkus thought of Twilight....



GO Edward!!! * Dazzles *

Random Kittens !!!

See Snoink---you love kitties after all!!!!!!!!!!


Can we have a Christmas special too and a everyday special episode!

OMG! That was hilarious. Everyone was looking at me like I was crazy.
*sniffs* you just HAD to make fun of Bella.
You could so make a career out of making movie spoofs.

Wow, you just made my day. It was so random, but in a good way.

WHY ARE WE YELLING?
WE'RE NOT. WE'RE JUST TALKING IN CAPITAL LETTERS.

That has to be my favorite part.

EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate.

<Edward scintillates>


EPIC WIN!


(and I was shouting by the way)


Edit: You know what I find interesting? That the part that most people (like me) found funniest is actually from the book.

*Rolls eyes* This was so random yet so funny.

I loved how you made fun of Bella.

Weeeee ballerina!!! Hahahahahahahah.

Good job.

Nariel

*GOLD STAR*

very good i like it and i like the charters in the script kepp wriitng

I really like the detail you put in the script and also the charters in the script it was very good for your age and also keep writting i really like reading this piece and i really enjoy it too.

LOL that was hilarious! Everything that fell on Bella made me laugh! Antartida, that was a great one! Not screaming just capital letters xD

My favorite part was:

EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate.

<Edward scintillates>

SNOINK: Ooooooooh. It’s Christmas time! SHINY.

Brilliant! Someone should really make this a film, and you should really continue this! =D

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that seriously killed me!!!!!!
I`m gonna go crash into a tree now!!!
(Psstt!!! that meant she liked it!!)

*Falls into fits of helpless giggle snorts* Awesome!!!!!!

Antarctica falls on BELLA

*Giggle snorts even harder*

Well done! hehehehe

Don't get confused now Snoink. You're not a lizard; just look at your avatar, it's a pig!

Clearly, candy makes people believe themselves to be lizards... but mostly it makes Snoink believe that.

Well, I have to say that Bella is pretty well summed up in this script. Can't really get more descriptive than, "I'M CLUMSY!"

Great job Snoink. Again!

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Hm.

Decent.

Got distracted and watched "who's on first" on youtube. Yeah.