Good stuff. It kept me hooked; I liked the two characters and more so their rather amusing relationship, I liked the idea behind Death's brother, in actual fact, I liked it so much that I reckon it should be developed on, rather than just get a brief mention. I liked the conclusion, that was also very clever, and although looking back I'm disappointed with myself for not realizing the significance of throwing the toast, but it was obviously your set out and dialogue etc that made that so.
So all in all, very well thought out.
Dan
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