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Oh my friggin goodness! That was hilarious!!!!

Ooh. I haven't checked this in a long time.
Glad to be able to induce laughter for you

Oh my gawd that was so funny!
I love the ending and by the way, I was laughing all the way through!
GOLD STAR! GOLD STAR! GOLD STAR!

okay, i know everyone else already said it, but it was HILARIOUS!
sorry about the caps. i seriosuly laughed for 6 minutes and 18 seconds flat when I read this, and it took me about 1 and a half minutes to finish reading it.

you should get bored and do this again, maybe with a different set of interesting characters...

dont do too many at once though, cycle them, it just gets confusing when you have to remember alot of parts

Peace,
God.

gold star...
still laughing...

It wasn't the funniest I've ever seen, but it was pretty funny!

My favorite part was-

Edward: Shoot. There goes my one and only true love. *shrugs* oh well, to the Volturi, AWAAAAAY!!!

That was hilarious!

At some points this was hilarious, at others it was boring. HOWEVER I have a copyright issue! You stole my "oh well" line, I demand blood! Oh well...I can do without blood I guess...cookies then?

I would like to see your copyright claim in legal black and white, Mr Amniel.

LMFAO.

I freakin' loved this. So well written and I was laughing through the whole thing.
Although I am A Die-Hard-Twilight fan, I loved this. Mocking Edward is shockingly easy, and superman and The Hulk were such a great touch.

"Hulk: D-uh. Me angry! You won’t like me when I’m angry! I smash you! SMASHY SMASH SMASH! RAWR!!!
*Charges at Edward*
Edward: Wha-?! ARGH. Feel the wrath of my hotness! *flings big green rock aside and poses in macho positions*
*Suddenly, the light shines on Edward and he sparkles. A lot*
Hulk: RAWR!!! Me can’t see! Me can’t see!!! *shields eyes and trips over big green rock*
Edward: I’m so sparkly! WHEEEEE!!! I didn’t know I could be even hotter! "

Probably one of my favorite parts. I loved it. And I'm actually writing something quite similar, maybe we could work together?

Haha, Meep. You're dangerous when you get bored, are you not?

Scripts that make fun of Twilight are sooo clichéed, but that certainly doesn't mean I would not enjoy them.

I know I am, but what are you, pretty-boy?

That's pretty thick, coming from the supposedly most pretty-boyest creature in the world. Haha.

I’m scintillating!!!

Oh my, that word has gotten a whole new definition after this certain saga of blah. No one can ever say or write 'scintillate' again, without being blamed not original.

… then she dies. How sad.*

Hahaha.

Edward: Shoot. There goes my one and only true love. *shrugs* oh well, to the Volturi, AWAAAAAY!!!

Hahaha. Epic wins for the win!


So, Meep, thanks again for the read. You should really save your energy to something else, haha Or then again, maybe not. Just be careful of not ruining the overly amazing previous ones with too many spin-offs.

See you around!


Demeter
xxx

Yup, thanks Dem!
I'm not planning to write another one anytime soon.

so, so, so , so , so so, so, so, so, so funny, again. Do not underestimate your self you are very, very, very, very , very very, very funny.

i was laughing the whole way through, i was like hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah * gasps for air and stops reading for a moment, catches wind then goes back to it* hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah * falls on the floor unable to breath through laughing* hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *finishes and goes to review while still laughing slowly getting down to small chuckles, to scratchy breathes.*

Ha! so funny

Oops sorry I accidentally pushed the submit button. Anyways... I really liked this. I have naver read twilight but if it is as funny as that I definitely want to ! ! ! My friends said the movie sucked. Oh well. Nice one.
TREE

Hahahahaa I laughed for atleast a minute when reading this:

Edward: I’m so sparkly! WHEEEEE!!! I didn’t know I could be even hotter!

Superman: *hands on hips* I believe you are scintillating, doofus.

Edward: Look at me!!! I’m scintillating!!! *prances around in circles*

I really liked the dialogue, it was funny and really catchy! keep it up:D I'd deafinately read more of these - just the giant bogger thing was a bit too dumb for my sence of humor=)

You should definitely get bored more often! That was really great. I was laughing to myself like a lunatic making people look at me wierdly.

Edward: I’m so sparkly! WHEEEEE!!! I didn’t know I could be even hotter!

Edward: Shoot. There goes my one and only true love. *shrugs* oh well, to the Volturi, AWAAAAAY!!!

Ok, i'm gonna go try save Edward. To the Volturi, AWAAAAAY!

PM me when you have something else posted, that was seriously awesome!