Young Writers Society

Well, naturally.

Wow... that's hilarious!! So whatever happened to the rest of FREAK? Is it ever going to acutally get published?

~Yoyo

yoha_ahoy wrote:Wow... that's hilarious!! So whatever happened to the rest of FREAK? Is it ever going to acutally get published?

~Yoyo

... after finals, I'll submit it in. Really...

*whimpers*

I love this!
Its so funny! It has inspired me to write something!
I lobe how Random Guy 2 keeps on coming back to life!
Keep writing!

Lol, that was so funny!

Random Guy 2 and Man With No Name were the best, especially Random Guy 2, never dead.

And, did I mention, ?

HA!!!!!

RANDOM GUY 2!!!! the first time he kept on talking, i was like isn't he dead?

GREAT PLAY, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT!


......hey would you mind us acting that out?

not as proffesionals or anything just for fun?

this is hilarious.

hehehehhehehehehehehe

*laughs some more

it was great

good work

XD XD XD XD Amazing!! Hilarilous! *insert a bunch of other adjectives with exclamation points!*

I have no edits!

Great job!

Et cetera!

Teh Wozzinator!

Just by looking at the title I knew I would love this.

and,

It made my day (:

Hi,
Extremely Hilarious! I have never read anything quite this funny before. I have to admit that when I first started reading it, I thought it was a bit strange, but now I think it's wonderfully unique.

I didn't spot anything wrong. It was very well done, I'm still smiling thinking back on it.

The ending was my favorite part

CAROLINA
Ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She guns down everyone with a machine gun and then runs off, leaving a pile of mangled bodies. She kills everyone except...

RANDOM GUY 2
I’m still alive!

DANNY
Shut up!

Suddenly, in another wonderful example of deus ex machina, the AUTHOR makes a 100 ton unicorn fall on everyone, killing DANNY and RANDOM GUY 2. Two other people emerge from the wreckage though…

PEARL
Where are we?

CHRISTIAN
Don’t ask.

It gets me every time.

I also liked how to title had nothing to do with the story. It was a very RANDOM piece.

I loved it!

-lg*

LOL!!! I loved it! Too funny! And judging from your Leopluridon thingy, you saw/ made the Charlie the Unicorn thing on youtube.com! I love that video! It rocks! "It's gonna be an adventure, Charlie! Adventure!" "Candy Mountain! The land of sweets and joy and joyness!" Yay magical Leopluridon, Charlie the Unicorn and his freaking kidney XD!!

This is hilarious!! )

This was hillarious...*almost dies laughing*

THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!

Oh. My. God. This is win. I am literally disolved into a puddle of giggles on the floor. When I read the title, I was like, "Yeah, this should be amusing," but that turned out to be an understatement. Downright hilarious!!!

[quote:]
DANNY
Hm. You wouldn’t think drunk people would be able to discern bad singing that well. [/quote]

Among others, that line is win. This whole thing is win. But haven't I already said that like ten times? Whatever. I can't count.

I commend you for being funny.