In my writing group we were given a task called 'without words'. We had written two character profiles and a description of a setting inspired by photographs and decided on an interior and exterior problem for each character. We then had to write a screenplay scene based on these, but with absolutely no dilogue. This is what I wrote.
EXT. COUNTRY LANE. AUTUMN. 1950. AM
Mary, 40, is walking along holding a photograph of her brother, 20, in soldier's uniform, smiling. Tears roll slowly down her cheeks. Suddenly, a gush of wind blows the picture out of her hand. She runs after it with a look of desperation on her face. It gets stuck on a low-hanging branch and she reaches out to get it, looking hopeful and relieved, but it blows away again, out of her reach.
Cut to Nigel, a 52-year-old African-American, further down the lane. He is looking around, as if searching for something, and he whistles loudly to beckon it to him. The photograph blows towards and he jerks his hand up reflexively to catch it. Mary runs round the corner towards him, looking frantic. She sees the picture in his hand, snatches it away from him and holds it to her chest, eyes closed. She looks immensely relieved. She opens her eyes and her and Nigel's eye's meet...
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