Young Writers Society

Hello there, Snoink!

Totally awesome and funny! The plot's so unique and the characters are so hilarious! You totally made my day!

BETH

Officially, this “town” is a city. So you’re the sheriff in this city. Except, I thought sheriffs served the entire county, so technically you should be the sheriff of the county

Really made me laugh!

Keep writing!

Peace out!

OMG this is wonderful!! XD wow um....this makes me want to draw/write my comics. o.o

Amazing!
So weird, but soooo funny!

Well done!

-- A.

Um, you guys. This topic is from nearly three years ago. Try not to post on or revive really old topics like this one, sometimes the author doesn't like that, and even so, there isn't as much point in reviewing it if it's a really old story or whatever and they aren't writing it anymore.

Lol! No, it's okay. Really. Otherwise, I would have locked it.

Thanks for all the comments, guys! I really appreciate them.

Wow, this is the first play like work I've read on here and it was HILARIOUS! You have a way with dry humor that makes plays stand out more. I personally don't like them, unless I can see them performed infront of me, but with yours it was like the dry humor was everything. So you didn't have to see it play out, because why so when you were fighting back tears. My favorite part is when Danny opens with "Because it is a catchy line that sizzles of sexual tension and makes it clear that I am a prick, thus making my character have a flaw." AMAZING!!

Ps. The shear randomness was a brilliant slice to the cake as well, almost better than one I would make *mmmmm coconut cream cake* JKJKJKJKJK
-The Written Chef

Pure genius, Snoink. (Dang, I love your username lol.)