This is my last try on The Obscured, and then I'm giving up.
THE OBSCURED (Scene One)
(Open to binary code, moving across the screen. The camera zooms in, and the words THE OBSCURED appear in the middle of the code. Fade to opening titles. Cut to Eclipse, sitting at a computer, typing something in. Suddenly, the computer's light turns green, illuminating Eclipse's face. He looks sternly at the computer, and moves his head in closer to the screen. He swallows)
ECLIPSE: Oh no.
(Cut to Eclipse, knocking at a door. Mist answers a few moments later)
MIST: What is it?
ECLIPSE: We just got this emergency message from the base.
(Eclipse holds out a paper. Mist takes it, and reads it)
MIST: Ah... Shit. Go contact DFMR Central. Fast, before something happens. I'll get Miasma, rendevous with me at the usual spot.
ECLIPSE: All right.
(Eclipse turns away, and starts to walk away. Mist grabs his arm, and he turns around)
ECLIPSE: What is it?
MIST: We're going to have launch Operation KO faster than we thought.
ECLIPSE: Are you sure?
MIST: We have no choice. Now go, hurry.
(Eclipse runs out of view of the camera. Cut to Warren Hall. He is loading a pistol. He stands up, and cocks it. We cut to an unseen person in front of a computer with a headset on. He clicks a button on the keyboard)
MAN: Hello?
ECLIPSE: Eclipse speaking.
MAN: What is it?
ECLIPSE: Get everyone evacuated. They're coming.
MAN: Oh, sh--
(Warren Hall bursts in through the door next to the man, holding a machine gun, and he begins firing. Cut to Eclipse, with a cell-phone next to his ear. We hear static, coming from the phone's speaker)
ECLIPSE: Hello? Hello?!! Damn it.
(He dials in a new number. The dial tone repeats four times, and then he presses a button, silencing the noise)
ECLIPSE: Oh no.
(Miasma and Mist arrive at a spot in a forest-like area)
MIASMA: Where's Eclipse?
MIST: I don't know, Miasma. Let's just hope he's all right.
(They hear footsteps approaching, and they look towards the sound. Cut to H, walking forward. H aims his gun at the camera. Fade to black. After a few moments, there are two gunshots)
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