Very Entertaining!
I loved it!
especially Billy.
hes lyk a stabilising quantity in the story.
the part about the dad and the daughter was entertaining too!
Quite funny.
tho more humour could have been injected in a more discreet manner.
comedies are the hardest to write LOL
very difficult.
im new here so im a newbie!
nice story!
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