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Mon Feb 07, 2011 3:20 am
PenguinAttack says...



Sugarcane sucked sweet
on railroad tracks, my sister
sleepless in the night.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:10 am
Jagged says...



On the softest nights
my father spoke not a word,
but merely held on.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:24 pm
Button says...



His eyes were dark, as
he thought on what had once been;
we watched quietly.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:50 pm
Lumi says...



Not a word was said;
the anticipation grew.
He died on the spot.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:58 pm
Button says...



He passed with love in
his wrinkled face, we did not
mourn, but remembered.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:00 pm
Lumi says...



I recall the song
you sang at our wedding:
you sang it off-key.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:03 pm
Button says...



And yet, it was from
the heart: you sought out notes, and
found all the wrong ones.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:05 pm
lilymoore says...



Was that an F sharp?
You ended the sonata
with a little smirk.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:23 pm
Button says...



You sat back down, and
unsure claps sounded hollow;
we watched the bride now.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:40 pm
Lumi says...



She slithered on down,
her train sedating the crowd.
What a succubus.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:47 pm
Button says...



Pollutants ate at
the lines of your irises,
and color dimmed out.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 7:43 pm
Jagged says...



The old photographs
lie crumpled and torn, and we
should have let you go.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:12 pm
MeanMrMustard says...



Go, emo emo
Emo, so emo, oh emo
Emo, should let go.


(5/8/6, whatever :smt001 )
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:13 pm
Button says...



But the process was
not that of intentions, but
rather that of time.
  





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Wed Feb 09, 2011 4:48 am
lilymoore says...



Ticking down her life
is a watch wound up enough
to give her one breath.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  








Teach a man to fish, he eats for a day. Don't teach a man to fish, you eat for a day. He's a grown man. Fishing's not that hard.
— Ron Swanson (Parks and Rec)