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Haiku Battle



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Thu May 12, 2011 6:45 pm
EtCetera says...



This blade in my hand
Heartless, ruthless, merciless
Does what I can't do
  





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Thu May 12, 2011 6:48 pm
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Jas says...



I can't write haikus.
Tried to get inspiration
Such epic failure.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Thu May 12, 2011 6:50 pm
Lava says...



I am trap'd in these
arms - heavy, leaden and mine.
I wish to break free.
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Fri May 13, 2011 2:46 am
mellophone7 says...



Trapped in the darkness,
I am longing for a light.
Will you provide it?
"The difficulty of literature is not to write, but to write what you mean." -Robert Louis Stevenson
"Write or die trying."
JA hatar pisanje.
  





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Mon May 16, 2011 7:11 pm
EtCetera says...



Soldier of shadows
I run in the thick darkness
Saving the lost light.
  





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Tue May 17, 2011 3:36 am
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Lumi says...



Paths of cobblestone
trail through the night like souls;
Minecraft is my God.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Tue May 17, 2011 3:44 am
mellophone7 says...



I follow this path
unsure of where it will end
taking the journey
"The difficulty of literature is not to write, but to write what you mean." -Robert Louis Stevenson
"Write or die trying."
JA hatar pisanje.
  





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Mon May 23, 2011 7:56 am
senseiawesome says...



Just take my damned heart
Crush my future, my dreams
My so called "best friend"
'This could possibly be the best day ever, but the forecast says that tomorrow will likely be a million and six times better.'

Today is Gonna Be a Great Day, Bowling for Soup

Hello there. I am a mass of contradictions
  





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Sun May 29, 2011 7:09 am
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Karzkin says...



I gave you my heart.
You gave me a gun, and just
A single bullet.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

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Sun Jun 05, 2011 3:51 pm
zone says...



It spreads like blood
infusing its perfect shade
out across the sky
Dreams come in waves
to take us home
Daylight stitches our eyes open
and we flicker on
-Eyes stitched open:The Telegraphs
  





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Wed Jun 22, 2011 1:34 am
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322sivart says...



Darkness or light? Niether.
Bright red, full of doubt in mind
Makes the children run
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Fri Jun 24, 2011 7:07 pm
Alpha says...



Colorful sunsets,
Brilliant hues of lavender
Greet the moony night.

Note: money isn't a word. I just made it up.
(Hey, I do have poetic licence, right?)
  





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Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:53 pm
mellophone7 says...



This brilliant moon
glows in the sky but will run
when touched by sunshine.
"The difficulty of literature is not to write, but to write what you mean." -Robert Louis Stevenson
"Write or die trying."
JA hatar pisanje.
  





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Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:49 pm
322sivart says...



A breath makes you run
A ray, maybe, cowardly?
Shine upon my face
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Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:09 am
Lumi says...



Eyes shine like flashlights
in the middle of the night;
oh wait, they're headlights.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  








If a story is in you, it has to come out.
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