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Haiku Train



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Tue Jan 25, 2022 12:19 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



I leave, my head bare
I don't return, my clothes torn
I'm gone, free for now
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Tue Jan 25, 2022 7:11 pm
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Hkumar says...



I'm gone, free for now
leaving this mortal body
entering new realm
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Thu Jan 27, 2022 10:32 pm
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alliyah says...



I enter new realms
peering at the waking sky
sun glows, clouds rest; still.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Jan 27, 2022 11:07 pm
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Plume says...



sun glows, clouds rest; still.
on grassy hills, hand in hand.
soft words unspoken.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Fri Jan 28, 2022 12:22 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Soft words unspoken
Hands entwined, feet entangled
Love behind closed doors
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Fri Jan 28, 2022 1:54 am
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Starve says...



bonsai

love behind closed doors
decades of fervent care
hide a tiny tree
  





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Fri Jan 28, 2022 1:58 am
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Hijinks says...



hide a tiny tree
in your heart, knowing that no
one can seek it there.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Fri Jan 28, 2022 3:40 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



None can see it there
The twisting patterns of scars
The pain in your eyes
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Fri Jan 28, 2022 4:19 pm
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Liminality says...



The pain in your eyes --
whisper of the ocean flow,
the swash and backwash.
she/her

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Fri Jan 28, 2022 4:37 pm
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fatherfig says...



the swash and backwash
of memories is constant
not tranquil at all
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Fri Jan 28, 2022 4:41 pm
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alliyah says...



no tranquility
can be found in sea stirring
wait for the hushed pause
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 6:40 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Wait for the hushed pause
Hold your breath, lest you miss it
The beautiful dawn
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 7:42 pm
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starlitmind says...



the beautiful dawn
drowned in an unnamed river -
nothing but bubbles.
.--. --- - .- - ---
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 8:34 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Nothing but bubbles
In this blood-red sea of death
This gory typhoon
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 8:41 pm
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Hijinks says...



a gory taboo
can always be converted
to lines on a screen
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien