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Haiku Train



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Sun Jan 14, 2024 1:18 pm
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herbalhour says...



the moment of dawn,
where i shared that last moment
do you remember?

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~l o v e r~

herb/tea/hour! He/She

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treading through abyss (novel)
  





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Sun Jan 14, 2024 5:00 pm
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Spearmint says...



do you remember?
we were members of ember,
birthed in december
mint, she/her


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Sun Jan 14, 2024 5:23 pm
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herbalhour says...



birthed in december
was our strife, pain and worry
i now loathe you too

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herb/tea/hour! He/She

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Tue Jan 30, 2024 1:34 am
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Liminality says...



I now loathe you too,
black and green insect, who let
someone tread on it.
she/her

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Tue Jan 30, 2024 1:56 am
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fatherfig says...



someone tread on it
the ice is thin here, stillness
just a cute facade
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Tue Jan 30, 2024 4:33 am
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alliyah says...



just a cute facade;
the bee, delicate, and then
all at once war comes.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Tue Jan 30, 2024 4:39 am
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herbalhour says...



all at once war comes,
like downpour out of the blue
it feels like sharp hail

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~l o v e r~

herb/tea/hour! He/She

projects:
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treading through abyss (novel)
  





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Tue Jan 30, 2024 4:54 am
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avianwings47 says...



it feels like sharp hail;
the realization that
you never loved me.
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Tue Jan 30, 2024 5:31 am
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JazzElectrobass says...



You never loved me,
How had I not seen before?
So blinded by love...
I am the Timekeeper, Quote Hunter, and Grave Visitor

"Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon." — Paul Brandt

Jazz Elektrobass
  





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Tue Jan 30, 2024 5:56 am
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Spearmint says...



so blinded by love
so deafened by delusions
i felt this coming
mint, she/her


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Wed Jan 31, 2024 10:26 am
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Liminality says...



I felt this coming --
mosquito in my ear flying
fast enough to squeak.
she/her

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Sun Feb 04, 2024 4:39 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Fast enough to squeak,
just barely, so minutely,
by without trouble
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Feb 05, 2024 9:02 am
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Liminality says...



"Bye," without trouble,
dandelion fluff crosses
a rushing river.
she/her

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Mon Feb 05, 2024 11:00 am
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avianwings47 says...



A rushing river;
it washes over my soul,
clears my mind with ease
hi
  





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Sun Feb 11, 2024 12:27 am
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Liminality says...



Clears my mind with ease
the waterbirds gathering
before the sun breaks.
she/her

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Stop being mean to your self-insert character, you're just being mean to yourself.
— WeepingWisteria