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Haiku Train



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35 Reviews



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Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sat Jul 16, 2022 1:12 pm
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Kelisot says...



My pained, final breathe
A disharmonious chord
Struck my heart so hard...
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Sat Jul 16, 2022 2:59 pm
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NewHope says...



Struck my heart so hard
Like a red crystal shattered
Into moonlit shards
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Sat Jul 16, 2022 3:11 pm
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fatherfig says...



Into moonlit shards
Rippling reflections bloomed out
Casting hopeful awe
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sat Jul 16, 2022 4:29 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Casting hopeful awe,
the sun kisses everything,
warming the lonely.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Sat Jul 16, 2022 4:33 pm
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NewHope says...



Warming the lonely
But still, I seem to shiver
Under the sad oak
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35 Reviews



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Reviews: 35
Sun Jul 17, 2022 1:59 am
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Kelisot says...



Under the sad oak
We hum a lament of grief
With the wind howling
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Reviews: 542
Sun Jul 17, 2022 2:18 am
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Liminality says...



With the wind howling
this broken branch slaps again
against hard-packed dirt.
she/her

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Reviews: 35
Sun Jul 17, 2022 2:39 am
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Kelisot says...



Against hard-packed dirt
I fell down and bleed red life
The blood screams agony
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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31 Reviews



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Points: 1130
Reviews: 31
Sun Jul 17, 2022 2:42 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Blood screams agony,
and the skin stretches oblong.
Save me from this cell.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Gender: Male
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sun Jul 17, 2022 8:31 pm
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Kelisot says...



Save me from this cell
The sinner screaming in hell
Free us with a spell
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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31 Reviews



Gender: Demigirl
Points: 1130
Reviews: 31
Sun Jul 17, 2022 8:36 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Free us with a spell,
a spell of love and passion,
Of humanity.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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30 Reviews



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Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Sun Jul 17, 2022 10:54 pm
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NewHope says...



Of humanity
That was stolen from our grasp
And burned in the flames
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
  





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Reviews: 31
Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:02 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



I burned in the flames,
grinning as the smoke painted
an image of me.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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105 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:09 am
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fatherfig says...



An image of me
Though I could never see it
The tree changes, grows
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Gender: Demigirl
Points: 1130
Reviews: 31
Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:26 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



The tree changes, grows.
It heals wounds, and repairs rot.
I might mirror it.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  








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