this quiet is nice - I sit under the dripping tree, after a storm.
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I love your poem @Vex3330, it's great to have another person join in the haiku fun! Technically what you wrote isn't actually a haiku, though - haikus have 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the next, and 5 in the last. Right now, your poem is 10-5-11:
Lone-li-ness does-n't ne-ces-sar-i-ly mean un-hap-pi-ness It's nice to have things a lit-tle qui-et-er
I hope that makes sense, if not feel free to ask for clarification! :)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.
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