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Haiku Train



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Mon Dec 18, 2023 4:30 pm
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Hkumar says...



Unbearable pain,
Monday morning blues persist,
Hope whispers through ache.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Mon Dec 18, 2023 4:41 pm
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APoltergeist says...



Hope whispers through ache.
But hope died decades ago
Why am I waiting?
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Mon Dec 18, 2023 4:44 pm
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Spearmint says...



whoops, wrote this at the same time xD :
Spoiler! :
hope whispers through ache
like rain, misting lightly on
your face: you will heal.


why am i waiting?
the clouds wait for no one when
they shout a downpour.
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Mon Dec 18, 2023 7:25 pm
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Hijinks says...



they shout a downpour.
I shiver in the words that
fall like sleety rain.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Tue Dec 19, 2023 11:47 am
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Liminality says...



Fall like sleety rain --
red leaves when the harsh wind blows
into tree-hollows.
she/her

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Tue Dec 19, 2023 12:11 pm
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herbalhour says...



into tree-hollows
you peer as if ts a heart
though you hated mine
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Fri Dec 22, 2023 3:41 am
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Hijinks says...



i thought you hated
mine, but as it turns out, i
was just projecting.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Fri Dec 22, 2023 4:53 am
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Spearmint says...



//was just projecting
growth for the next two quarters->
[the future knows you.]
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Fri Dec 22, 2023 8:54 am
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Liminality says...



The future knows you,
shining blackbird, sharp stirrings
in evergreen leaves.
she/her

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Wed Dec 27, 2023 12:42 am
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Hijinks says...



in evergreen leaves:
blurry shapes, and I think I
see your brow and nose.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Wed Dec 27, 2023 3:18 am
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herbalhour says...



see your brow and nose?
the ones you say are ugly
those are mine as well
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Wed Dec 27, 2023 1:40 pm
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LuminescentAnt says...



Those are mine as well
And yet you always take them
Saying it’s your “right”
The problem with quotes found on the internet is that they are often not true.
- Abraham Lincoln

LuminescentAnt ~ Lum ~ Ant
(she/her)
  





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Wed Dec 27, 2023 2:06 pm
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herbalhour says...



Saying it’s your “right”
to scream and shout at me too
like a dictator
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Thu Dec 28, 2023 3:52 am
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Plume says...



Like a dictator,
I enjoy control. Alas,
you cannot be reined.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Thu Dec 28, 2023 3:54 am
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APoltergeist says...



You cannot be reined,
wild horse in mountains above.
You will not be tamed.
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