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Haiku Train



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105 Reviews


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Points: 33
Reviews: 105
Mon Mar 15, 2021 12:50 pm
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fatherfig says...



my shivering trees
covered by blankets of sun
the wind can't chill them
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Mon Mar 15, 2021 2:14 pm
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blueca says...



the wind can't chill me
i bundle my coat against
water from the storm
i can't beleive it's not gender!
artim/artos/artims/arself
my name is the same as my user, or you can call me jan Laso!

romance makes me uncomfortable, please don't.
  





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129 Reviews


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Reviews: 129
Mon Mar 15, 2021 2:44 pm
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yosh says...



water from the storm
will flood the rice and corn fields
but can't flood our hearts
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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245 Reviews


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Reviews: 245
Mon Mar 15, 2021 4:04 pm
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Spearmint says...



can't flood our hearts but
we all can fill them up with
hope love and cookies
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Mon Mar 15, 2021 4:05 pm
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yosh says...



hope love and cookies
the promise of tomorrow
sweet and savory
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Mon Mar 15, 2021 4:50 pm
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illy7896 says...



Sweet and savoury
Is the jewel of everlasting love,
washing over time
  





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Mon Mar 15, 2021 5:25 pm
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fatherfig says...



washing over time
tears dont erode our hardly
buried memories
Last edited by fatherfig on Mon Mar 15, 2021 8:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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23 Reviews


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Points: 1966
Reviews: 23
Mon Mar 15, 2021 8:01 pm
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blueca says...



buried memories
fragments of history stuck
hidden by the sand
i can't beleive it's not gender!
artim/artos/artims/arself
my name is the same as my user, or you can call me jan Laso!

romance makes me uncomfortable, please don't.
  





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Fri Mar 19, 2021 10:38 pm
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Spearmint says...



hidden by the sand
tiny crabs are camouflaged
living their short lives
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Fri Mar 19, 2021 10:41 pm
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fatherfig says...



living their short lives
flowers bud and they blossom
without worldly care
Last edited by fatherfig on Mon Mar 22, 2021 1:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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542 Reviews


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Points: 41664
Reviews: 542
Mon Mar 22, 2021 2:51 am
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Liminality says...



without worldly care
the shadows of rambutan
trees dance in the dark.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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37 Reviews


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Mon Mar 22, 2021 4:28 am
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YellowSweater says...



Trees dance in the dark,
over the brink of movement,
they have lost themselves.
  





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Points: 4984
Reviews: 621
Wed Mar 24, 2021 4:14 am
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Rook says...



they have cost themselves
everything; they are indebted
to the earth and stars.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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542 Reviews


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Reviews: 542
Wed Mar 24, 2021 4:18 am
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Liminality says...



To the earth and stars
float these grey dust motes, hoping
to become space rocks.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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Reviews: 1227
Wed Mar 24, 2021 4:42 am
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alliyah says...



we became space rocks
unrooted; free-falling light
hurtling toward earth.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








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— William S. Burroughs