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Haiku Train



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Reviews: 129
Sun Jun 06, 2021 9:35 pm
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yosh says...



they refuse to sink,
those memories of autumn,
floating, but not gone
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Tue Jun 08, 2021 12:41 am
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fatherfig says...



they refuse to sink
my mud annoyances climb
the walls my being built

_______
floating but not gone
tattered leaves bob on water
like threadbare patience
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sun Jun 13, 2021 6:21 am
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Liminality says...



Like threadbare patience,
the leaves on the lake, floating
amid thick white clouds.
she/her

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Sun Jun 13, 2021 9:33 pm
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yosh says...



amid thick white clouds
traces of winter emerge
hanging on to snow
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:33 pm
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alliyah says...



ear pressed on to snow
i hear summer thawing through
just beneath the ice
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:34 pm
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momonster says...



just beneath the ice
there is a sliver of hope
it's out of my reach
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:51 pm
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creaturefeature says...



it's out of my reach,
a soul left in the snowdrift,
a frostnip solstice.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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542 Reviews



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Sat Jun 19, 2021 12:13 am
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Liminality says...



a frostnip solstice --
ice crystals tremble on glass,
hanging from windows
she/her

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Sat Jun 19, 2021 3:42 am
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sakeofvanity05 says...



hanging from windows
dew drips its misty shadow
ink pools at my feet
"It was a great mistake, my being born man;
I would have been much more successful as a seagull or a fish.

~ Eugene O'Neill, Long Day's Journey Into Night
  





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Sat Jun 19, 2021 7:53 am
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illy7896 says...



ink pools at my feet,
Staining lava, thats eating
the ground beneath me.
  





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Sat Jun 19, 2021 11:25 am
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fatherfig says...



the ground beneath me
trembles i am but a mouse
shaken by giants
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Tue Jun 22, 2021 2:33 pm
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Liminality says...



shaken by giants,
ocean waves slosh and scatter
the foam-white seagulls
she/her

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Thu Sep 16, 2021 4:03 am
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alliyah says...



the foam-white seagulls
borrow the clouds for the day
in exchange for wings
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Nov 05, 2021 10:26 am
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Liminality says...



in exchange for wings
mother ants suffer largeness --
targets for slippers
she/her

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Thu Jan 20, 2022 8:12 pm
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Hijinks says...



target for slippers:
that two hour long physics
class presentation.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  








Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers