* moderators, if this is not in the right place, I apologize*
There's been a play lurking in the dark recesses of my mind for over two years. I've written it, and deleted it in disgust. The idea has been tweaked and twisted, tampered with, and rethought. About five pages are currently on paper, and I consider this my exhibition. I'm aiming for around fifteen. Also, what I have now is some of the worst dialogue I've ever written. But I don't have a choice. I have to put something to paper.
Now, I'm stuck. I've got all elements of my play, (I'm in love with the ending, and the allegory) but the nuts and bolts of the conflict. I'm at a loss how to represent with dialogue the complex argument I wish to write.
Here's the aim: You are to help me by participating in this thought experiment. I will give a critique and 100 points to each person who answers the following question:
You are one of the last people on earth. Humanity has been all but wiped out. It is YOUR TASK to create a new world order, a new structure for religion to govern the new world. An ideal system which will provide peace and prosperity to all on earth.
-Please use historical precedent to tell me why your system is the most ideal system.
- PLEASE argue. Please respond to anyone who disagrees with you. Please feel free to insult their ideas. Please provoke them. Please develop an intense dislike of them.
I'm not joking. The more you help, I'll throw in extra goodies.
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