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Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:41 am
Twit says...



A very witty, funny story about a student at somewhere really posh - like Oxford or Cambridge, and is an account of the weird things that happen, and the eccentric traditions of the colleges. I'd probably pick it up and flick through.


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Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:47 pm
Chloe(: says...



A love story, takes place in the 1600's. A little boring, but maybe that's just 'cause I'm not a fan of Historical fiction.

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Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:20 am
chipsandguacamollie says...



Fantasy about another planet, similar to Earth, but somehow different. I can't really elborate more than that. Sounds sort of creepy though.

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Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:52 pm
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You nearly have it right!

Anyway
It seems like a sci-fi or legend romance. One of the characters is very romantic.

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Tue Apr 21, 2009 8:16 am
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Gahks says...



It seems like some kind of philosophical novel like Life of Pi.

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Tue Apr 21, 2009 9:45 pm
lyrical_sunshine says...



Sounds like it could either very literary or very creepy, horror-esque. :) I like it.

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Fri Apr 24, 2009 1:09 am
Dr.Awesome says...



A little creepy, sounds horror or thrillerish; but could it possibly be romance?

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Thu May 07, 2009 9:14 pm
Twit says...



Sounds weird and not quite right. Maybe a romance, or a horror? I don't think I'd pick it up, it doesn't sound right. Although I might look at the cover art and blurb.


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Thu May 07, 2009 9:22 pm
Esmé says...



Contemporary. For teens. Deffinitely now fantasy, or sci-fi, perhaps a romance of some kind with a highschool setting. I don't think I'd take another look at it basing on the title alone, though, if only because my associations don't entirely match my booklikes.


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Thu May 07, 2009 9:31 pm
Blink says...



A little awkwardly put, but if it's what you want, I'd say a kind of literal story with regards to gaining the throne, or a kind old man who makes her granddaughter go on adventures. For teens. I don't know. I think it's a story with so many possibilities; humour, serious, but I'd say realistic.

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Sun May 10, 2009 12:00 pm
WaterVyper says...



Hm, it sounds like a story about ideas and morals, and a whole lot of adventure. A dark thriller, probably psychological.

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Sun May 10, 2009 10:17 pm
carino says...



Hm. Sounds like it could be quite fourth-dimensional...

Something about a revolution, I'd think. A few people who want things to change.


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Wed May 20, 2009 1:22 am
Bickazer says...



A rather creepy fantasy in an urban/contemporary setting, about a doll's house maybe, or some sort of magical manipulation.

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Thu May 21, 2009 12:38 am
200397 says...



Science fiction, in which the world (or worlds) are in jeapordy, and it's up to the protagonist to literally save it. I don't know if it would have aliens in it, but maybe. *shrug*

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Thu May 21, 2009 2:57 pm
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I don't know, it seems like it could be about anything. Definitely set in America, with a teenage or preteen girl as the M/C. I'm thinking dust and sun with flies in -- quite nice, actually, but I probably wouldn't pick it up.

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