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Fri May 22, 2009 1:26 am
200397 says...



Sorry, you weren't even close. :) Um, maybe a comedic view of (Murphy's) life. It seems like it could be both a coming-of-age story, or an adult's view. It's very original, though. :)

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Fri May 22, 2009 4:46 am
TexanWriter says...



Sounds to me like the world is in total chaos, possibly WWIII, and the MC, maybe with the help of others, brings the world back to normality in a sense.


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Fri May 22, 2009 4:14 pm
Blink says...



Meh. Perhaps a tad too generic; I'm finding myself wondering whether it's some deep philosophical journey through life or just something in which the main character happens to be a person. That said, it's intriguing and I would look at it, but the blurb would need to fit in with it quite well and specify some more.

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Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:58 pm
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4/10

Um. All right. Sounds like The Last House on the Left, which is one of the most boring titles ever. I probably wouldn't pick it up. It doesn't give anything of itself to specualtion, you know? Doesn't say anything.


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Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:01 pm
Chloe(: says...



6/10--Sounds kind of interesting, but probably not the type of book I would pick up.

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Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:23 am
foxfire says...



It sounds interesting and catches the attention of the reader. From the title, is it some life related story or something about drama.

I would guess that it would be some kid who has some personal or social problem they have to co

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Sun Jun 07, 2009 11:30 pm
time_fox says...



You didn't put up a title. Unless the one in your siggy is it??

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Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:30 pm
Twit says...



Doesn't really sound much like a title, but it makes me think of a fantasy story that involves pack animals like wolves or foxes. Told in first person, female M/C, lots of magic and telepathy. I might pick it up to read the blurb.


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Tue Jun 23, 2009 7:37 pm
nixonblitzen says...



I just look at it and think, "Didn't you mean to type 'scarf'?" But other than that, it sounds like a fantasy story, so I probably wouldn't read it.



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Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:47 am
Lil_Pau says...



It sounds like either a modern thriller/horror type or a story of someone struggling in life. I'll just read the blurb.


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Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:13 pm
LilyJamey says...



Makes me think of a series of fantasy novels. I might read the summary on the back, but probably not go any further.

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Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:16 am
Rosendorn says...



Sounds like a romance. Not for me, really. If the cover was fantasy-ish then I might read the blurb. Probably wouldn't go farther.

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Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:41 pm
Manny says...



Sounds like a novel centering around cats in some way. I'd read it depending on what the blurb said.


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Sun Jul 05, 2009 4:11 pm
Binkatong says...



It's very straight forward, and sounds like it'll focus on a boy who becomes a part-time Paladin (obviously). It also sounds like it would have more of a humorous twist to it.

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Mon Jul 06, 2009 8:54 am
Lil_Pau says...



Sounds like a psychological thriller...or with a bit of horror. I'd pick it up to read the blurb. :P

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