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Haiku Train

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Points: 371
Reviews: 35

Wed Dec 06, 2023 2:16 am

Kelisot says...

The first fireflies
Fell from the dark, black heavens
Like a pretty angel

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Points: 1003
Reviews: 10

Wed Dec 06, 2023 5:37 am

APoltergeist says...

Like a pretty angel
Falls down, like Icarus's dreams
Of sun softened wings

"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"

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Points: 41664
Reviews: 542

Thu Dec 07, 2023 6:04 am

Liminality says...

Of sun-softened wings
and chorusing cries -- matters
for morning insects.

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?

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Points: 144350
Reviews: 1231

Thu Dec 07, 2023 6:30 am

alliyah says...

for morning insects
I will wake with the sun-rise
breakfast is best fresh

- a haiku from the perspective of a frog

you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now

but i have promised to return

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Points: 156589
Reviews: 1503

Thu Dec 07, 2023 3:53 pm

IcyFlame says...

Breakfast is best fresh,
Sunrise whispers in each bite,
Morning's feast unfolds.

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Points: 35
Reviews: 32

Thu Dec 07, 2023 4:40 pm

herbalhour says...

Morning's feast unfolds
dewdrops and raindrops glaze leaves
bird song rings through air

nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers

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Points: 1003
Reviews: 10

Thu Dec 07, 2023 5:41 pm

APoltergeist says...

Bird song rings through air
A monkey sways whilst eating
Syrupy sweet fruit

"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"

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Points: 35
Reviews: 32

Thu Dec 07, 2023 6:42 pm

herbalhour says...

syrupy sweet fruit
sickening with aroma
although poisoned

nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers

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Points: 1003
Reviews: 10

Thu Dec 07, 2023 8:13 pm

APoltergeist says...

Although poisoned,
The cake was quite savory
And I enjoyed it

"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"

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Points: 35
Reviews: 32

Thu Dec 07, 2023 10:55 pm

herbalhour says...

and i enjoyed it
the pain and the tears but I
never want to cry

nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers

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Points: 1003
Reviews: 10

Thu Dec 07, 2023 11:25 pm

APoltergeist says...

Never want to cry
I want to sing, full of life
Full of undying fire

"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"

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Points: 35
Reviews: 32

Thu Dec 07, 2023 11:37 pm

herbalhour says...

full of undying fire
yet somehow you extinguish it too
maybe you cry gold

nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers

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Points: 1003
Reviews: 10

Thu Dec 07, 2023 11:47 pm

APoltergeist says...

maybe you cry gold
maybe you cry gray shadows
i'll love you the same

"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"

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Points: 35
Reviews: 32

Thu Dec 07, 2023 11:49 pm

herbalhour says...

ill love you the same
where and when doesn't matter
I always find home

nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers

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Points: 1003
Reviews: 10

Thu Dec 07, 2023 11:51 pm

APoltergeist says...

I always find home
Whether its your arms or your
Gold espresso eyes

"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"

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What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music.
— Søren Kierkegaard, Philosopher & Theologian