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Haiku Train



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Fri May 19, 2023 8:11 am
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Buranko says...



along the thin branch
chestnut blossoms; reborn out
of this cold weather
  





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Fri May 19, 2023 12:01 pm
Liminality says...



Of this cold weather
are the red leaves which shake
under autumn sun.
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Fri May 19, 2023 1:13 pm
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alliyah says...



under autumn, sun-
shine, and leaves learning to fall-
out of love with spring.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri May 19, 2023 2:49 pm
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Buranko says...



out of love with spring,
in love with the summer sun,
ah! molten ice-cream...
  





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Sat May 20, 2023 12:18 am
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Liminality says...



Ah! Molten ice-cream
is fallen on the hard rocks,
breaking up the black.
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Tue Jun 06, 2023 12:38 pm
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Buranko says...



breaking up the black
are sun patches, on the floor;
pieces of morning
  





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Tue Jun 06, 2023 1:05 pm
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alpacaboss says...



Pieces of morning,
The sun is slowly breaking
In rays of glory.
John 3:16; Joshua 1:9; 1 Timothy 4:12
Professional Bible nerd, Christian and classical music enthusiast, and alpaca lover
To God be All the Glory
  





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Tue Jun 06, 2023 10:29 pm
Liminality says...



In rays of glory,
the climbing vines bask, showing
their purple flowers.
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Tue Jun 13, 2023 6:56 pm
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Buranko says...



their purple flowers,
a warning to the foolish
enough to taste them
  





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Sun Jul 16, 2023 1:44 am
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Liminality says...



Enough to taste them,
green shades of dense foliage,
says the mountain bird.
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Sun Jul 16, 2023 4:08 am
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alliyah says...



the mountain bird says,
the sky never seems as far
as when the land fades.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Jul 16, 2023 5:40 am
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Liminality says...



As when the land fades,
the sea rises, so skies fade
when the sun rises.
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Sun Jul 16, 2023 6:41 am
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fatherfig says...



When the sun rises
So do eyelids fluttering
Light as a dove's wing
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sun Jul 16, 2023 6:52 pm
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OrabellaAvenue says...



Light as a dove's wing,
Eyes trained to the sky above,
Clouds form as dawn fades.
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened."
~Dr. Seuss

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Tue Jul 18, 2023 7:18 pm
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Liminality says...



Clouds form as dawn fades,
they gather at mid-morning
against the deep blue.
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here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a treee called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings