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Haiku Train



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35 Reviews


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Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sat Jul 16, 2022 1:12 pm
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Kelisot says...



My pained, final breathe
A disharmonious chord
Struck my heart so hard...
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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30 Reviews


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Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Sat Jul 16, 2022 2:59 pm
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NewHope says...



Struck my heart so hard
Like a red crystal shattered
Into moonlit shards
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Sat Jul 16, 2022 3:11 pm
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fatherfig says...



Into moonlit shards
Rippling reflections bloomed out
Casting hopeful awe
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sat Jul 16, 2022 4:29 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Casting hopeful awe,
the sun kisses everything,
warming the lonely.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Sat Jul 16, 2022 4:33 pm
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NewHope says...



Warming the lonely
But still, I seem to shiver
Under the sad oak
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35 Reviews


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Reviews: 35
Sun Jul 17, 2022 1:59 am
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Kelisot says...



Under the sad oak
We hum a lament of grief
With the wind howling
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Reviews: 542
Sun Jul 17, 2022 2:18 am
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Liminality says...



With the wind howling
this broken branch slaps again
against hard-packed dirt.
she/her

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35 Reviews


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Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sun Jul 17, 2022 2:39 am
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Kelisot says...



Against hard-packed dirt
I fell down and bleed red life
The blood screams agony
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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31 Reviews


Gender: Demigirl
Points: 780
Reviews: 31
Sun Jul 17, 2022 2:42 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Blood screams agony,
and the skin stretches oblong.
Save me from this cell.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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35 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sun Jul 17, 2022 8:31 pm
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Kelisot says...



Save me from this cell
The sinner screaming in hell
Free us with a spell
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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31 Reviews


Gender: Demigirl
Points: 780
Reviews: 31
Sun Jul 17, 2022 8:36 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Free us with a spell,
a spell of love and passion,
Of humanity.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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30 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Sun Jul 17, 2022 10:54 pm
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NewHope says...



Of humanity
That was stolen from our grasp
And burned in the flames
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
  





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Points: 780
Reviews: 31
Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:02 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



I burned in the flames,
grinning as the smoke painted
an image of me.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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105 Reviews


Gender: Male
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:09 am
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fatherfig says...



An image of me
Though I could never see it
The tree changes, grows
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Gender: Demigirl
Points: 780
Reviews: 31
Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:26 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



The tree changes, grows.
It heals wounds, and repairs rot.
I might mirror it.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  








You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron