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Fri Feb 18, 2022 6:32 pm
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Stellarjay says...



Still I could feel you
not wanting your soul to leave
it left with a gasp
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 11:01 pm
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dissonance says...



it left with a gasp;
the gentle creak of my bones,
a resounding wake.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 11:10 pm
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Plume says...



a resounding wake:
cacophony of voices,
"she left far too soon."
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Thu Feb 24, 2022 11:18 pm
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alliyah says...



She left far too soon,
Spring laments Winter's exit
as the ground thaws new.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Feb 25, 2022 5:01 pm
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Starve says...



as the ground thaws new
hold this biting silence tight
it bores deep and nests
  





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Fri Feb 25, 2022 5:07 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



It bores deep and nests
Sticks criss-crossed like an embrace
Eggs and shiny and new
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Fri Feb 25, 2022 6:00 pm
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Stellarjay says...



Eggs and shiny and new
Chicks pop out and chirp and cry
Chickens all grown cluck
  





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Fri Feb 25, 2022 6:49 pm
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fatherfig says...



chickens gown all stuck
as it tries traipsing forward
straps tear - now dances
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Wed Mar 02, 2022 10:44 pm
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Plume says...



straps tear - now dances,
controlling hands now inert.
the puppet: he lives.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Thu Mar 03, 2022 6:34 pm
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alliyah says...



The puppet, he lives
arms-lurch-knees-fold-spin-falling
just to maintain strings.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Mar 03, 2022 6:37 pm
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Stellarjay says...



Just to maintain strings
twisting, plucking and strumming
to find the right tune
Spoiler! :

I didn't press submit fast enough XD
The puppet: he lives
eyes blinking, people screaming
tears rolling down face
  





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Thu Mar 03, 2022 6:45 pm
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fatherfig says...



to find the right tomb
twisting crawling upwards vine
tendrils ensnare me
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu Mar 03, 2022 6:49 pm
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Stellarjay says...



tendrils ensare me
pulling me deep underneath
fighting for a breath
  





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Thu Mar 03, 2022 9:18 pm
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Starve says...



fighting for a breath
the land cracks under the sun
the windvanes stand still
  





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Sat Mar 12, 2022 8:52 pm
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Plume says...



the wind vanes stand still,
march destruction around them.
like lion, like lamb.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  








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