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Haiku Train



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Sat Mar 13, 2021 10:35 pm
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illy7896 says...



The shuffle of the words
My eyes move along the pages
Tapping the fragments of a different reality
  





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Sat Mar 13, 2021 10:42 pm
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yoshi says...



like cherry blossoms
we always bloom with color
but fall down too soon
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 12:08 am
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Spearmint says...



we fall down too soon
withering away to dust
cold reality
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 1:51 am
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yoshi says...



cold reality
cannot withstand the blister
and heat of loving
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 7:22 am
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illy7896 says...



The heat of loving
Grows cold against
The icy winds of hate
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 9:50 am
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Liminality says...



The icy winds of hate
reverb in crystal caverns,
becoming stone-songs.
she/her

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Sun Mar 14, 2021 6:06 pm
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Hkumar says...



becoming stone-songs
meant to scorn the universe,
fueled by raging fire.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 6:17 pm
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fatherfig says...



fueled by raging fire
fathers hands glide over and
softly steady mine
Last edited by fatherfig on Sun Mar 14, 2021 6:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 6:23 pm
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JoyDark says...



two soft and steady
hands, beaten but not broken,
lift me from the mud.
she/her

woah
i actually made a post
pretty radical if you ask me
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 6:57 pm
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illy7896 says...



lifting me from the mud
music reaps
the green grass that is hope
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 7:25 pm
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Spearmint says...



green grass that is hope
blankets the springtime valley
blowing in the wind
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 7:58 pm
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fatherfig says...



blowing in the wind
hopes know where they need to fly
so they land softly
Last edited by fatherfig on Sun Mar 14, 2021 8:58 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sun Mar 14, 2021 8:23 pm
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alliyah says...



'Don't they land softly?'
The bird breathes to plucked feathers,
as they float away...

Spoiler! :
note for those unfamiliar with haiku form ~ the lines are 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables ~ loving all the poems in here though, and also love how the themes always bounce around to so many different neat topics.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Mon Mar 15, 2021 7:50 am
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Liminality says...



As they float away,
golden motes of dust cycle
glimmer-specks of sun.
she/her

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Mon Mar 15, 2021 7:56 am
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illy7896 says...



Glimmer-specks of sun
Sparkle and shine, leaning over
Shivering trees
  








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