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Tue Jan 30, 2007 10:10 pm
Tara says...



Reminds me of some sort of Irish lore. A sad tale, with some sort of love story hidden in it.

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Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:36 am
Saphira says...



Sounds like a epic tale of romance and hardship. maybe a terrible war brought on by love. The title is so catchy that i would read this book based on the title! (and enjoy every minute of it!)

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Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:37 am
Myth says...



A short comical story about a food fight, I would have to read the back to decide whether I'd borrow it or not.


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Wed Jan 31, 2007 4:11 pm
Wiggy says...



Sounds like some western robber being chased by a constable. Might read it.

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Wed Jan 31, 2007 4:27 pm
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This could be a lot of different things, from a believe-in-yourself teen novel to a thought-provoking literary novel. If the cover art was interesting I'd pick it up.

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Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:34 am
Saphira says...



A young man has got amnesia and is returning to the place where he lost his memory. He unlocks a mystery surrounding his amnesia when he gets streams of vivid flash backs.

Excellent :D

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Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:38 am
Myth says...



Magic, a sorceress who has been scarred for life and so has to wear a veil. Depending on the cover art, I'll choose whether to pick it up or not.


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Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:17 am
extrastapled says...



Enigmatic. I'd expect something dark and a little confused. That, or light and comical. Could go either way.

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Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:49 pm
tinny says...



An fast paced action story, with an unexpected twist halfway through that changes the main characters perspective on his mission. It might catch my attention, but I'd probably pick it up or not dependent on the cover art.

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Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:12 pm
Myth says...



Reminds me of an underground places that is filled with human bones from a war long ago. Very dark and I'd pick it up after reading the back.


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Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:17 pm
tinny says...



Something similar to Shade's Children by Garth Nix springs to mind, with Constable being some kind of leader, and his followers being called clouds... As a title it's intruiging, and I'd more likely than not have a read of the blurb.

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Sun Feb 11, 2007 7:29 am
Sohini says...



something to do with welding?i wouldn't be too interested.

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Mon Feb 12, 2007 5:31 am
LowKey says...



funny book. Ever read Never Sniff a Gift Fish. That's a funny book. There's also It's Hard to Look Cool when Your Car's Full of Sheep. both funny books. Your title sounds like it would fall into that category.


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Tue Feb 13, 2007 12:52 pm
tinny says...



The name 'Amora' definatly sounds female, and it seems like a fantasy. Personally it's doesn't sound to appealing to me, it doesn't really say anything about a plot, but it's likely that I'd pick it up anyway to read the blurb.

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Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:08 pm
Myth says...



Reminds me of Vernon's Clockwork Terror. I'd pick it up depending on the first few pages.

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