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Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:03 pm
322sivart says...



Dream away your mind
To a place I remember
Where shadow's dont lurk
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:30 pm
Button says...



Somewhere far away
between ribbons of rain and
sunshine; happiness.
  





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Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:29 pm
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Lumi says...



I dreamed of you there,
flying among the angels;
your wings were lovely.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:35 pm
lilymoore says...



oh my, little bird
your feathers are dripping red
all over the rug.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:44 am
Button says...



But fly, dear sparrow;
even the storms cannot stop
your flight to heaven.
  





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Fri Mar 25, 2011 4:48 pm
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Lumi says...



We are the sparrows,
turning our beaks to the wind;
our frontier awaits.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:20 pm
Jenthura says...



Go now and leave me,
Explore the wildernesses,
That your heart desires.
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:16 am
earendil says...



I'll be there when you
come home, if you ever choose
to return at all.
  





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Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:52 am
Lumi says...



With candles blazing,
I await your arrival
from the deadened night.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Apr 03, 2011 12:54 pm
Button says...



Only by candles
can you see me cry; darkness
will keep them from you.
  





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Mon Apr 11, 2011 5:18 pm
lilymoore says...



You with your black hair,
split-to-bits and too tangled
for my silver combs.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:30 am
darkangel_05 says...



Little sunflower
Stares up at the big sun
Even without shades.

(That's pretty lame.)
Sometimes B sharp,
Never B flat,
Always B natural.

I love writing songs and listening to music and books and daydreaming and coffee at five in the morning.
  





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Sun Apr 24, 2011 5:51 am
Lumi says...



This glory on clouds
shines like the brightest embers:
a golden rainfall.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Apr 24, 2011 6:27 am
Button says...



standing on sunbeams,
with psalms on our hands and feet,
we sing broken-voiced.
  





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Sun Apr 24, 2011 6:31 am
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Lumi says...



I love you like God
loved all His little children
before they rebelled.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  








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