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Fri Apr 03, 2009 7:35 pm
Chloe(: says...



Fantasy about someone who has the choice to live forever. I thought of a moon when I heard that title, don't know why.

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Sat Apr 04, 2009 2:22 pm
Twit says...



I don't know. It sounds really boring, like a story of love and life and other icky stuff. Wouldn't bother picking it up.


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Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:37 pm
SeleneForeverDream says...



That sounds... interesting. Very unique, though nothing really comes to mind that I can relate to when I read it.

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Sat Apr 04, 2009 5:31 pm
Helpful McHelpfulpants says...



Eh. From the title, it sounds frankly trite, like either poor fantasy or some juvenile 'high school' literature.

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Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:46 pm
Chloe(: says...



Sounds like historical fiction that takes place in Africa.

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Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:19 am
Twit says...



Boring. The end of what? It doesn't tell me anything, other than it probably wouldn't be worth picking it up. Sorry.


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Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:27 pm
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KailaMarie says...



It seems interesting. It makes me think of either a fantasy story or something relating to a family story. I don't know why the second one. I would at least read the back to see what it's about.


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Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:29 pm
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Some thing really really really really happy. I mean like overly happy.

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Mon Apr 06, 2009 9:46 pm
Krupp says...



Could either be a thriller, or a contemporary novel, though I'm not sure which. I'd read the back to see what it's about first haha.

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Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:12 pm
Imperatrix Xoco says...



The "Concrete Skulls" thing made me think of a paranormal murder mystery where there's a murderer going about killing people by turning their heads to concrete. Which actually sounds like a pretty awesome way to die/kill, and I'm going to write it down while I still have a hold of it. "Shattered Confines" sounds like the sort of harlequin romance with a Spanish male holding a woman in a dramatic dress while overlooking a sunset or something.

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Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:30 pm
Twit says...



Either a series of funny, wacky stories about a really cool shop full of little animals from Jim Henson's Creature Shop, or something completely different. So comepletely different that I don't know what it'd be about. But the title could be translated a few ways, so I'd probably pick it up to see what the blurb on the back was.


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Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:12 pm
chipsandguacamollie says...



Sounds like either some sort of very sad story, about somebody dying maybe, or a thrilling adventure story in some weird country.

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Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:52 pm
Chloe(: says...



Medieval fantasy. Gold Powder plays an important role in this story, maybe to make tools or medicine.

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Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:45 pm
KailaMarie says...



Something about neglect. And probably relationships, either family or love or something.


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Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:13 pm
Shauni says...



A story about an orphan child that goes to a re-homing family but it's never accepted. Well treated, nice clothes, everything except for one thing... Never was accepted well in the family, there was something missing.

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