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Sat Mar 07, 2009 3:57 am
Monument Soul says...



Story of an Eccentric young woman searching for a goal in life.


Omni-Fate:Destruction Art Thou Saviour





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Sat Mar 07, 2009 4:05 am
WaterVyper says...



A sci-fi/fantasy mix, with a bit of religous scandal mixed on the inside.

Glass Shards
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.





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Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:51 pm
Twit says...



I immediately think romance, about broken people and broken relationships and drama and sex scenes and a woman who's got a kid but no husband and she falls in love with someone who's got a troubled past, and she's got a troubled past, and it all gets hairy. Wouldn't read, sorry.


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Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:13 pm
Explosive_Pen says...



I think of a book about this really rich, snobby girl. I'm sorry, but that does not appeal to me.

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Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:20 pm
Krupp says...



Pirates or something related hahaha

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Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:30 pm
Explosive_Pen says...



Hah! Way off, Krupp!

Anywayz, yours makes me thing of a boardwalk at the beach on a sunny day in summer. And, because I'm my fantastic self, I think that maybe some guy gets shot and it turns into one of those who-done-it type things. xD

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Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:46 pm
Krupp says...



Ever shot a gun before?

I'm gonna say vampires. Or a girl who wants friends. Either way, it doesn't matter to me.

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Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:06 am
200397 says...



Something similar to Freaky Friday: troubled teenager switches life around and gets into trouble in the process. Something like that?

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Mon Mar 23, 2009 12:18 pm
Twit says...



It would depend on what genre it was under, but I probably wouldn't pick it up. It doesn't say anything at all, and the most I can come up with is a vague mental picture of ants.

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Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:00 am
lilymoore says...



Definitely sounds like a very girly girl book but one that still shows a little girl power really kicking butt. Go Girl Power!


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Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:35 am
Helpful McHelpfulpants says...



Couldn't say for certain, but brings to mind images of vaguely witchy fantasy, possibly meant for so-called Young Adults, style o' fing. But it also depends on the cover, so, hard to say. I could as easily picture it going on the cover of some super-realism-focused book about a family's slow disintegration, etc., etc. :XD

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Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:12 pm
Master_Yoda says...



I'd definitely read this one. The title is gripping and intriguing. It might refer to the name of an organization who are pilots and have been decorated with awards of gold... Or it could be something completely different. It sounds like a fantastical piece for young adults/ adults.

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Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:29 pm
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Either a really cool fantasy story about giants and races going extinct, or a novel about someone who had great aspirations, but gets nowhere. Either way, I'd probably pick it up.

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Fri Apr 03, 2009 7:27 pm
Shauni says...



A romantic fiction, located on the Himalayas. The pursuit of happiness in a desolated place. Somehow, the character finds a complete new world between the mountains.

Lavender and chocolate milk (a hard one)





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Fri Apr 03, 2009 7:31 pm
Blink says...



A strange romantic comedy featuring two very different lovers... Or not. :P Sounds like something I'd look at: sounds like satire, at least. The film 'Milk' comes to mind. But that's probably because it has Milk in the name. xD Sounds like something powerful put into fun terms.

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