Young Writers Society

"There's two rules to this." he started off, looking at all of us. "One, no one speaks of it. Two..." there was a short pause as he took a deep breath. "Two... try not to die."

"Basically, it's like the fight club?" a girl asked.

"No," he hissed. "Let's get started, shall we?" he clapped his hands together.


I had an idea to write a story but then it seemed like a good idea to make this a storybook. Make people join this wonderful and yet awful happening.

This is about a group of people that are criminals. Not really bad people, they are just robbers. They go into homes, offices, restaurants, ect. and steal all they can then sell it for a big profit. But the thing is, they do this for the fun of it. The police have been on the search for them but can't manage. They're next mission is to reach Europe and start their 'business' there. That's when the search for the group begins and the profit crowds them. There will be people on the hunt after them, law enforcements as well. But there will be this one group that will find every way to get them.

So, who's in?





WE WILL START ONCE WE GET ENOUGH PEOPLE.

I'm in! Or rather, Alex is.

Name: Alex Rydell

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Appearance: Blonde; still has acne which makes him look a lot younger than he is. Sparkling blue eyes behind square glasses. Great smile with those little vampire teeth. Skinny; strong arms.

Personality: Friendly, cheerful, open, pretty smart, loves adventure and slacking off. Your basic popular, geeky guy, but with a twist. When under an incredible amount of stress or with certain triggers, becomes almost psychotic; this shows through sometimes when he laughs. Great sense of humour, but his jokes tend to be dark. Flirts casually and amiably with every girl he comes across.

History: Raised by a single father. Went to juvenile hall when he was fourteen for almost beating a little girl to death. Since then he’s clean. Day job is fixing computers.

Grand Theft Auto or Robber? Robber. Loves cars, but finds there’s more variety in housebreaking.

Alright. Thanks for participating. We will start one we get more people.

Name: Lena Daniels

Age: 16

Gender:female

Appearance: Long dark red hair that falls almost past her waist. Her left eye is a milky blue but her right is a dark grey and a whole bunch of freckles. But innocents ends there. She has a long jagged scar running across her face cutting though her left eye and across her nose. She is blind in her left eye so she has a disadvantage in staying hidden.

Personality: She is very smooth and sneaky with her word choices. She tends to use only Ross that will offend someone in a way or another with out them knowing. She is sort of snake like but can become like a innocent girl when a cop is around.

History: Her parents were nice caring people. When she was 8 her parents were murdered by the same person who kidnapped her soon after. Her kidnapper taught her the ways of evil and soon Lena was too good at it. She murdered the kidnapper getting the nasty scar during the fight and ran off to the city.

Grand Theft Auto or Robber?: Grand theft auto. She loves the feeling of beating the cops in a shinny new car she had stolen. And hey, it gets more money too.

It's my turn to give myself a profile. At first I wanted to be a girl but all the slots are booked... I might put more things up. Anyway, here's moi.

Jake Tripper

Age: Twenty-One

Gender: Male

Appearance: He has short blonde hair, a dark blonde that almost passes for light brown. His hair is mostly styled but sometimes leaves it messy. His eyes are the color teal, like the sea. He is pretty tall, a skying six foot. There is a scar on his shoulder from a car accident he got into when he was just sixteen. Drunk driving, just horrible.

History: He was raised in a crazy family. A good kind of crazy. When he was a child, he lived a good life. His family was loving, they made good income. The family time was amazing. he was raised very well, cultured and smart. But when he moved to America, life got tough. He was still the good guy, but he just thought that his 'good guy' motif would not help him with his life here. People disliked him from the start, one of the reasons being he lived in the UK from birth to eight years of age. They were jealous and always tortured him for having a 'gay accent'. So ever since America, he started going to the dark side, that's where people accepted him.

Grand Theft Auto or Robber?: Preferably both. He manages with both.

Toby Rouse

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Appearance: Short in the back but longer and wavy in the front dark brown hair. His left eye is piercing and shines like an emerald. While his right eye is a grayish blue that reminds people of a calm foggy morning near the ocean. Tan healthy skin he developed while living in Hawaii as a child. He is an average height and has a surfers body.

Personality: Behind his eyes lie two conflicting and fighting personalities, waging war on who would take control of his mind. Behind his green eye lies the urge to experience the rush of stealing anything he can get his hands on. He excels in sneaking and snooping but if he gets caught, can't lie to save his life. Making this personality a threat to himself and any coconspirators.

Behind his blue eye lies the feeling that he needs to be a RobinHood figure, to give any of his findings to the poor. But this also means he has the compulsive urge to swoop in blatantly and save the day, ignoring any and all stealth. But while under the influence of this personality, he excels in self defense and fighting. He also becomes uncanny with a gun, but since he thinks of himself as a hero, he never shoots to kill or even injure. Only to scare or take out security cameras or systems from a safe distance.

He has almost no control over what personality he assumes and can't tell what one has control over him at any given time since both have intertwined themselves so well into his normal everyday life, so it's always a roll of the dice.

He has never had a girlfriend and has never had the urge to get one. He thinks that it will happen at his own pace and when the right girl shows herself. He secretly has a thing for girls that don't like him back because he wants to be able to steal her heart. But he would never tell that to anyone that because he finds it embarrassing.

History: He has grown up in the lap of luxury and his parents are two of the most influential people in the UnitedStates currently. Though they had always pressured Toby into everything. Into taking martial arts, into getting straight A's no matter what, into dropping his dream of being a superhero when he was twelve. Even into what girls he should like or what shows he should watch. His parents loath anything to do with breaking the law or anything that conflicts with the bible in any way. His father is best friends with the current head of the FBI and is a multimillionaire business man, though would never share a cent with charity. His mother is basically a glorified, unpaid nanny who dotes over her only child but only seems to push him farther away. He eventually moved away to a continental US private school when he turned 16. He started stealing from (mostly) the rich when he learned of the corruption of the economy his fathers business has caused, the poor suffer while the rich lean back and sip on a expensive imported beer. Toby wants to change that, but no matter what he says to his father, his father stands by his morals, so Toby is taking things into his own hands.

Toby is a robber and doesn't even know how to drive, he is usually taken place to place by limo, public transportation (rarely) or by friends.